I'm on Twitter hun, same name. I am on Discord too, but haven't actually created my own server, I'm just too lazy to do it if ya know what I mean.

Mwah!

There is nothing better than a beauty acting innocent while they are fully capable of tearing you apart, either with their poisonous tongue or, in this case, game skills.

You will, my dear

Nope, it's correct. It's taken from the Chinese way of saying this phrase, which is just kinda cute imho!

Thanks, corrected it

It's a different way of saying except. Commonly used in British English. Hope that explains it for you.

To be honest, I am starting to think I might enjoy this kind of job.

I applaud the author for the way he has written this. It grabbed and dragged me (kicking and screaming) to the next chapter. Please continue!

Why did this sentence send a shiver down my spine?

I feel pity for the dude, but I also wanna see what she's gonna do to him.

My kinda gal

Thoroughly enjoyable story to read. It doesn't romanticise the ugliness of war, nor does it dismiss the impact it has on the psyche of the soldiers fighting in it. I applaud the author for keeping it real!!

I'm hooked already.

Thank you for your honest feedback! Maybe next time, I'll write something that you'll enjoy even more!

I have achieved my goal here, hehe!

Glad to hear it!!

'Rushed' has a typo as well

Minor typo here with 'slightly'