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stiker6mthPostedA work of art from someone deserving recognition, I appreciate the amount of effort and work put into this masterpiece. This is something that I urge you all to take the time out of your days to read
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pretty peak to be honest
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passable
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making my spine tingle
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sure he isn't
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mhm
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think i got the memo
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- stiker1yrPosted
Writing Quality- The writing quality is better then most I've seen on wn, but that doesn't account for much since there is a lot of trash writing here. The writing is a breath of fresh air compared to all the hot garbage that is usually on this app. Stability of Updates- The author said that they would want to upload daily but couldn't due to irl stuff so i'll give them the benefit of the doubt and leave it as irl things getting in the way of writing. Story Development- too early in the story. Character Design- Not much to complain about here, I hope that as story progresses the characters don't drop in quality World Background- So far the world seems very interesting and new. The integration of greek mythology, cultivation and systems is a unique take on all genres.
- stiker1yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: Why do I hear boss music?
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Emo MC
"I don't want anything too flashy, and black would be best. Otherwise, dark colors work fine." - stiker1yrCommented
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"Hmm…perhaps it was fate? Also, making men fall into illusions of getting raped by other men is a lot of fun you know?" - stiker1yrCommented
We just stealing from everything now, aren't we
Broadswords were too heavy for his fighting style while normal double-edged swords weren't to his liking. He wanted something similar to a katana but not exactly. Something like a certain sword he had read about named 'Dawn's Ballad' but longer. - stiker1yrCommented
Mc really be the antagonist out here
"To be completely honest with you, this wasn't on purpose. Now I know it sounds like an excuse, but hear me out. I genuinely forgot that you existed." - stiker1yrCommented
That's disgusting
Although, Damien mused that there was most likely water on the lower floors, considering how plant life increased as he descended. Running his hands along his skin, Damien watched 2 years' worth of dirt and grime rub off, leaving smooth skin that looked like the work of an artist. - stiker1yrCommented
Just Breath? not like breath attack or breath beam, just breath?
Damien had acquired the dragon race's most prided trait, Breath. - stiker1yrCommented
bland name ngl, but not bad
And although Damien wasn't provoked, he was indeed rushing to kill this beast. During his 6 month stay in the subspace, Damien had read up on the various beasts in the world. It seemed that all beasts were descended from what was known as 'Godbeasts'. - stiker1yrCommented
waifu zara???
Sensing Damien's complicated emotions, Zara walked over and nuzzled up to him. These past months, Damien and Zara had grown extremely close to each other. They were alone in this world without anyone else, so it was natural for them to become each other's support system. - stiker1yrPosted
Personally I would say that this is a breath of fresh air in regards to the system genre. Usually novels that follow a story including a system, such as this one, are lackluster and come off as bland, this is a reoccurring trait within the system genre. However this story takes on many existing ideas and make them something entirely new and amazing. Another good point in regards to this novel is the writing. The majority of the books I've come across display some terrible writing, however this problem isn't at all evident in this novel. The writing quality is immaculate and the story flows exceptionally well. While I can't yet speak on the update schedule or the development of the story, I can say without a doubt that this story is heading on a path towards greatness and I want to be along for the ride.
- stiker1yrCommentedCh 13 Devour [1]