This the best Star Wars story I have read of the old republic era and in the sith empire too. Hope you update soon because I want to see more of this story.
Great chapter you started, I haven’t seen anyone write the MC recantated as Adam turarus in a long time hope you update soon can’t wait to see more.
Great story you got there is very promising so keep doing what you doing and hope you update more chapters real soon. may the forth be with you.
Great first chapter, can’t wait to see more of this badass droid and do you know how hard it is to find good star war stories about a battle droid.
Great start for the story can’t wait to see more on what’s going to happen like what Pokémon would he costemize I hope is charzard or geninja because both are my favorite Pokémon
Great beginning of the story, can’t wait to see more on what are funny MC and his retard buizel are going to be doing what type of Pokémon he going to get for his team
Hey are going to have him keep weapons with him because even if it’s useless is good for fighting people when the time comes for it. Also what Pokémon are you going to give to the MC
I think a mareep or a hound our would be a good starter Pokémon for the Mc to get not to mention both have mega evolution.
This looks like a beginning of a great story, can’t wait to see more of this story when your updating and what Pokémon he going to have or what gang he going to create
Hey what are you going to use that power armor you found in mt. Glenn, are you going to make iron man armor or make a new design from it. Can’t wait to see what going to happen next and are his clones going to be left behind to protect his island and tech from both Altas and Salem
Hey when the MC take over the island can MC uses alternative energies to power the island like water, wind, sunlight, thermal, oil, atomic, etc and can he create gunpowder for ammonation or mix dust and gunpowder ammo to make it stronger
Hey if the MC wants to build a robot army in the future, get some ideas from Star Wars, terminator, marvel, transformers, and Godzilla for mecha Godzilla imaged the look in everyone’s face if MC created Mecha Godzilla to fight a kaiju sized Grimm