It's a great story but lost interest when Alex became Adrian and when it became premium(the economy is hard)

Is it possible to reduce the paragraph lengths, makes it harder to read otherwise very good

Its good, but for 25 yr old he gets excited way too easily. I would recommend adding the threat levels, cultivation levels and anything important in auxiliary tabs

I have returned

I am sure you will do better over time

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It is good, but the writing quality bleached my eyes, I will come back eventually

Eventually someone should have too much pride to want extra life? ?

No offense taken

Used for reference

Deserves a plaque in the hall of fame for this story, repping the club and doing it justice.

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I don't even waste my time buying it because once you open the chapter or read the title you will know if it has good translation quality or not.

I would have read it but I have seen this storyline like so many times .....................................................................................................................................

Are you meant to be reviewing or insulting because I am stating opinions so I do not care if you do not like it or take it to heart. That is your problem. So continue to be dumb, I am sure you will get places in life.

the grammar and translation quality become so bad from forty plus chapters. Story is good Story is good Translation Qualtiy is bad Grammar is bad

How do you review with dignity from three chapters, get to like 10 first

Who knows???