thats what we like, if you can improve then thats what matters.

nah my boy said the sauce LOL

true i hate it when authors make edgy mcs

pretty nice first chapter

drippy [img=recommend]

damn my boy started specking in hieroglyphics

Disclaimer: I gave stability of updates 5 stars because it wouldn't allow me to submit my review with rating that too. I know when a story is going to be good when I read one, first chapter is fire, introduces as much information as possible, and the pacing is somehow not bad even though so much has happened in a single episode. One thing I dislike about most webnovels is how bad the writing is, unique writing bad wording, that maybe the case because a lot of them are translations, but so far there aren't any noticeable grammar or spelling mistakes. We are given little information but not too little to the point we don't understand anything, conveying information is important in writing. The character is realistic, he hears something happening, what would a normal human do? Hide, which is what he did. He saw some weird alien thingy's coming in and also saw his peers run to the entrance, what does he do? Join them. I was surprised when he ran away, because what most system authors in webnovel would have done is let him stay and fight the monster and gain some bs superpowers that would make him better then everybody else. That's an automatic 5 stars for me, also I would like to talk about how much is written in the episode, there isn't too much or too little writing. It might be to early to rate this a 5 star but if the author keeps on going defiantly will be on my top 10 novels.

my boi got that MC name lol

school lunch doodooo