Typical shit novel. Honestly can't authors think of better idea for the novels? Most of the time you could guess the plot no fun at all. Master? Expert? Mysterious being? i already know where this shit going. Be creative, it wont kill you. Shit novels ton out there and im sick of this common fucking plot. Comm sense? fuck your ass. For character development you have to let him suffer bla bla bla, let bitch die bla bla bla, clingy start of mc suffering shit so he can get fucking character development. Be more brain less and do shitty plot so you can see the novel as realistic. Shit thinking from author. Be creative bitch

One of ths best fanfic out there but the author seem like just a lazy idiot. He ask for donate donate all the time with little to no update. Im pretry sure he dont even need to ask for donate if he just keep going and writing. Same with armipotent. The book dont ask much for donate but eventually it gpt to front advertising page. He seem lack of confident about where his book can be. Or he is just want the easy money. Just begging

why would not they are enemies?? i dont see any point of befriending mc. dont tell me you gonna pull trash trip like SoN oF fAtE??

poor writing skill. dont know how mc look like dont know how mc surrounding environment look like dont know what country he is in nor any common sense of the country he is in. the author forgot to write or dont bother with detail at all.Overall newbie in the field of writing,short chapter,character ok but lack of life cause of no detail,plot average,personality of character average,not so boring character nor have any unique personality.Story development take the path of daily life type but lack of writing skill and creative idea make boring.average plot cause there is nothing to be looking for future since reader could easily guess the plot but still readable and there is a chance of turning back as the time pass and author writing skill become better.recommend for casual reading.

bromance itself is cringe

bromance itself is cringe