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DeityOfSlumber

DeityOfSlumber

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I'm a new writer and I write for fun, read a lot of books too but I mostly read fanfiction.

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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber2d
    Replied to XzDanielzX

    Agreeable; however, the "Worseness" of your house and the street is subjective, for someone who's seen the grass on both sides, it's up to them based on "their" experiences to decide which is worse and to choose their poison. Essentially, I believe your claims come down to them being valid, while also not understanding that the choice of which is worse, the decision to say that living with their abusive parent isn't worth it and that they should go out into the real world, report to the authorities that he believes are corrupt, and fend for themselves, is ultimately his, and with his previous experiences, which I show and talk about in future chapters, he decides not to. So while I understand and can even partially agree with your claims of his decision being unreasonable, odd, and confusing, the perspective changes when you look through Ken,  the protagonist's, eyes. Now I can agree that I may not have done the best job delaying such information about his past life for future chapters, but I can assure you that it is there, and that I have my reasons for doing so. In Ken's case, as I explore in the story, his decision to stay with his abusive parent is influenced by various factors, including past trauma and the perceived trade-off between stability (albeit in an abusive environment) and the feelings one who's never felt before may gain. It's important to acknowledge that the concept of "worse" is relative and deeply personal, shaped by one's unique life experiences and perspective. Again, thank you for taking the time to comment and for the thought you've put into your responses so far, and I invite you to continue forward. [[P.S. I will say that such a conflict between staying with his father and leaving will be a constant theme that is properly explored and talked about through the book.]

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Pilot
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber3d
    Replied to XzDanielzX

    I'm unsure what you mean by 'dependent.' He goes back to his abusive parent because, as I briefly showed in the beginning, he hasn't lived a good life in his previous one. In future chapters, I will show that *Skip for Spoilers* he lived an even worse life than the one he's in now. To address your other comment about how 'being so submissive just to get food and shelter is illogical,' not to be rude, but the price of 'just food and shelter' is subjective, and such a take could be considered privileged depending on the person. To someone who's lived a majority of his life on the streets, has had to fend for such things completely by himself, and understands the struggles of such a life, getting such things for 'free,' practically, is a very good deal. So, to him, it's not 'illogical.' Lastly, he's twelve—a twelve-year-old in a world filled with superpowered humans. In a completely foreign world, he hasn't quite understood yet, it's reasonable for him to choose to stay with his abusive dad at least until he understands the world better and amasses more strength. As I've mentioned already, he doesn't live in the most peachy part of Musutafu, meaning, from what he knows, going to the authorities won't always help. I hope this addresses and fully answers your question. If you have any more concerns, please feel free to comment again.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Pilot
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber5d
    Replied to XzDanielzX

    How so?

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Pilot
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber30d
    Replied to omiguh

    No he's not a sidekick.

    Ch 26 Chapter 26: Slice of Life
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber1mth
    Replied to unknown2allbutme

    I forty-second that

    In the springtime, in his house, Kirishima was putting on his new uniform. Once done, he sorted his hair and hardened it like he planned, with two horns protruding and the rest tied in a ponytail.
    To Become Unstoppable
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    Replied to KingKarma_1766

    Money

    The plumper man's eyes did a quick sweep around the house, clean, save for the bottles of beer, lacking the usual pants, lipstick, and overall telltale signs of a woman having been here.
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber1mth
    Replied to Aniket_Aggarwal

    No.

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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber1mth
    Replied to katowisa_dragon

    Kinda?

    'Aww Why? You know you want, besides, what has this trash done to deserve your compassion?
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber1mth
    Replied to Nik_Xin

    Understandable, your confusion makes sense, however I kinda Need OC's to make a story, and if you read on their interactions, personality, and them as a character would be clearly explained. If your issue is no MHA characters when rest assure they will appear but the OC's WILL be a prominent thing in the book.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Misfits Inaguration
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber1mth
    Replied to katowisa_dragon

    Understandable, however looking at it from my POV I have a character I need to put into the world and develop him with his own experiences and interactions, it is inevitable that I will need OC's to develop him since the MHA cast is only so big. I will say that in the coming chapters 20's and forward after this over reaching arc ends there will be wayyy more MHA characters but yeah that's why I have as many OC's as I do.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17: Yoshimura's Debut
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  • DeityOfSlumber
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    Commented

    This should be refreshing, someone using OFA with more thought process than just 'SMASH' in their mind.

    'No don't punch, I just need to save Bakugo. Just hold him and use the one second to drag the boy out of the mud. That's it. Yes, that should do it,' he quickly made a plan of action and went for the monster. 
    MHA : Hero Time
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber1mth
    Replied to Akisu

    Let us *Play* a little bit.

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    This Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber2mth
    Replied to CyberRain_Official

    Sure, but to make such an amount in one week or two, to someone who's never had to spend more than say 2,000 in one sitting is quite the sum.

    'Everyone could get 1 million.'
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  • DeityOfSlumber
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    Commented

    *an eye on*

    Shirotsu creates a bug clone and sends his real body underground. My eyes catch it easily so I keep an on his real self as his clone runs out to catch my attention. His real body isn't moving and doesn't leave the underground area, he's trying to lure me into a trap with his clone. I take my bow and load it as I jump high into the air. I load an arrow with wind chakra and send it like a missile into the ground where his real body is. I purposely have the arrow fly directly through his clone, the micro blades of wind on the arrow destroying the bugs.
    Genius Hyuga Twins [Finished]
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  • DeityOfSlumber
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    Replied to The_Best_3329

    In a hero school like ua, where they have full jurisdiction over whats going on and licenses, nah they'd be fine.

    'That must be her quirk, From what the media says, it allows her to put nearby people to sleep by exuding a sleep-inducing aroma from her body.'
    MHA: Spray Life
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber2mth
    Replied to SUGARBOI

    NIN Nin

    I raised my new scarf to cover my lower face. This was my first ninja mission, and I needed to look the part!
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  • DeityOfSlumber
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    Replied to SUGARBOI

    personally not if it isn't a shop designated for such weapons, like there are gun shops so if this is a sharp weapons spot then sure I guess. Also, this is New York, and while I haven't been there enough to say if this is or is not normal I will say that that place is a little weird soo....maybe?

    It was a katana! 
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  • DeityOfSlumber
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    Commented

    ???? 60x6=360, 60x5=300 so did you mean 5 times.

    'Ice spider queen? Ice spiders..... FIFTY?!? what the fu-THREE HUNDRED LUCK?!?! that's like.... what is 300/60 again..... og yeah its 6.... SIX TIMES MY LUCK STAT AS A REWARD?! this seems like its going to be hard if I have a time limit of one year
    Maxing out my luck in a cultivation world
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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber2mth
    Replied to AstolfoTheFemboy

    You want to give a reason or any credible explanation for this god awful review or can I go ahead and delete this since it adds no substance in any way shape or form

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  • DeityOfSlumber
    DeityOfSlumber3mth
    Replied to JayChan77

    OC though Knuckleduster was someone I looked at when making the character.

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: Into the Abyss
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