From what I’ve seen thus far, this is great. The story is different from the usual I have read. I absolute enjoyed the first five chapters and can’t wait for more. Hoping this isn’t dropped is my wish. There are so many questions, yet not enough answers. Only by reading will I find them, anyways, this is an absolute reD.

Mhm, I see. Well thanks for the information, helping me grow.

Everyone hating on her.

He lost interest after Sitri stopped using lightning to temper Arthur.

Yes.

No.

OhOho. ✍️✍️ More ideas. 🤝

Even if Sitri did say something, nothing would change.

I AM using it, it never highlights those mistakes.

Keep going. ✍️

He will.

It takes time, but Arthur has the boost given by the blessing, thus allowing faster growth. Conflict will come in the future.

Yes. But the food is only temporary

Really? I guess I should change rational to logical. Critique me more and help me learn! I also understand what you’re saying, I’m working on improving, thank for the comment.

Idk. Idk who will be. I intended to ask my readers.💀 I have the story planned out, but not all of it.😔

He is still growing, well, he is taller now. But there will be no ‘real’ description yet, heh.

Inform me when you succeed.🤝

So Arthur aint truly broken, yet.

I don’t play games. 🦅

My corrector didn’t catch this mistake?! F@*k!