Why I feel the last part is from Steven he videos

Add another girl From nisekoi

Short man

So u r going to put reality and game into one or not

I know but I'm all writing a type of weapon novel so I want to take reference So I am just asking

Good story but can u power up the mc Op mc are best. And please write a little longer. But I like the story about it. But are u going add more powerful weapon or u are going to give him like training a weapon master