I've reached till chapter 30, and decided to create an account just to comment, what I want to say is so far so good. I came after reading Vampire Dragon, another series that Pancake made, at first it was understandable a few mistakes here and there, which is normal for everyone. But what I can feel is that the story will be evolving into a much better story, just like what happened with Vampire Dragon, can't wait to see the development! And that's all props to you PancakesWitch. I love all of your novels, they allow me to pass time, while being bored, and gice me a huge thrill.