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Yeah I am

Hello :). Thanks for your response. By the way, I've stopped posting on Webnovels and made the switch to "ScribbleHub." 🤥

Damnnn I see. Discord changed so much atp. Like the community got so much nicer and funnier. No more kids screaming around. Btw I was also quit for a long time and returned 3 weeks ago.

Where you been?? How‘s life for you?

SEN?!!!??! You're alive?!!! Oh I'm rewriting the fallen angel because I hate the way I wrote it.

I wrote most of it better, if you want to read it again

HAHAHA

I'm glad to hear that it has motivated you. I'm going to read the last 2 chapters at my leisure over the next few days. I have Corona at the moment and it makes it hard for me to concentrate. Anyway, I can say one thing, I really enjoyed the chapters I read. Especially how detailed you narrate or write. Your vocabulary, the English language is really good on your tongue. And one more thing, never overexert yourself, so if you think a break would be good, take one. A lot of writers forget how dangerous that is to their health. Keep up the good work, because I and others will enjoy reading in the future. I will give you some of these so-called "power stones" every day. They are a kind of incentive. So, for example, if I give you one, more people will see it. This will increase your numbers of views or readers. I wish you good luck. See you in a few days! :)

I have read a bit and I really have to say that I am positively surprised and impressed. Still, there are little things that could have been done differently, such as several paragraphs and not all in one go. As I said, when I finish reading it, I'll give you my completely honest opinion and don't worry, it will be 100% positive. Your novel alone is better than 90% of the webnovels right now, because many here are not really good, but your novel has made a VERY GOOD start, so keep it up!

THANK YOU SO MUCH, and of course I will improve my "writing", thank you for taking the time to show my weaknesses. you’re also right about "description of characters", i will make few sketches for that, because I am also working on a manwha, so there will be extra chapters where I describe | draw how the current characters look like.