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My friend, a good start, an interesting system, the continuation of the story stimulates curiosity, please continue writing.

Dude, you didn't drop this, did you? I don't know or don't know of any decent fanfic about Martial Peak. I'm impatiently waiting for the new episode.

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Even though I don't comment much, I've been here since the first episode. I love reading your story. I took a break because the last arc was boring for me, but now I've come this far by reading it from the beginning :D

The first step is to apply the nature transformations to the leaves. Step 2 is to seal around the hand with the appropriate item (like chidori for lightning, but without further superficial self-harm). The nature transformation as the 3rd stage is to release a larger area and control its effect (for example, in the anime, Naruto splits the waterfall with the wind). I leave it to your imagination to develop the stages and implement more.

It's nice to have sections like this, my friend, it helps us understand the story better. But I wish you made the chapters a little longer, it ends in one breath. [img=recommend]

i hope more will come

SixthSense1029 I don't know in which direction you want to advance the story from now on, but if you run out of ideas, you can make parts that focus on the wishes of the girls in the harem.

For HP fiction, you can make a reincarnated harem plot as james potter, or it can be a completely different person, which takes place in that period but it can be challenging for you, on the other hand, you can make a reborn as draco malfoy fiction, the character can try to save his dark family from the bad outcome..

dude there is a system tag but there is no system do you plan to activate it in the future or will you not add it?

dude i think it's a great idea and about the operation bankai, instead of writing more than one mouth in the fight scenes, you can use 3rd point of view or add pov, because there are confusions as you write

dude, definitely write a new one, but as advice, don't use too many jumps and backlinks because it breaks the operation.

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I am reading your novel, but after you pass 10 chapters, you can add new chapters under the old chapters that will cause problems, or you can publish them in a different place.

If I remember correctly, there was a 15000 word limit, which may be due to that.

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