Several spelling and grammer mistakes, but overall good story. I am enjoying it. Recomend a native English speaker editor, to clean up stuff.
"They are of the nature affinity like us." Zirani shook her head. "I could never stand them, too much postering although it was funny to see their reactions every time I refused them. My only love at the time was for nature. Thank goodness my mother never allowed any to live in with us or near us."
Aether Beasts
Fantasy · I_S_Rift
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