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Never seen a brown asian.
Snow white and the seven dwarves
comment section is the most toxic thing I've ever seen
For all those wanting to read ahead, this is a repeat/rebrand of a novel known as the Reaper Of The Martial World by the same author. Go read that if your tryna read ahead.
She means Evelyn of course.
Host being in favor and in opposite? Am I being dumb rn or is this a mistake?
See how everyone in his family is not-harem? His parents, his uncle and aunt, his grandparents. Author, don't break that.
Yet*
I can never unsee that.
The lowercase i hurts me.
I think the story is good. Only have two problems. The first and biggest one is the religion factor within this. It uses a real existing religion and has the main character suck up to that religion. Like it isn't as if the author is just incorporating elements of that religion as inspiration but actually have prayers/blessings/religious practices that are completely unnecessary for fiction. I, as a believer of a completely different religion, have a hard time reading moments where the MC will pray and not feel like I am doing something wrong by reading this. Please, if you are an inspiring author, do not include real religions within your books. The global community is diverse, and while drawing inspiration from your religion can be good, only include prayers and such if isn't a real religion. No offense to anyone who practices the religion within this book,
Out of the blue confession real quick.
Ain't he the most popular tho?
Surprisingly, I didn't cringe. This was actually funny. Is this...web novel humor?
Don't take this as an insult author. Just a tip for improvement.
Edgy. Cringed. Need to get an edgy police for all edgy teens on web novel.
Liked that novel before author started including gay people. [img=recommend]