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Lol😆, how can cat videos restore our faith in humanity?
Tf is a heart-shaped pussy? Does that mean she's so loose that her cunt became heart-shaped?
Come on, guys, it's a fkn lizard; stop being horny.
Lmao😆, other Chinese fanfiction MCs don't even have a Japanese name like that. I'm surprised it isn't Uchiha Feng or Uchiha Chaoxieng or something, lol.
It's pretty understandable. The author doesn't want to make the MC too OP. We all know giving the MC free NORMAL and CLEAN clothes are going overboard that would disrupt the flow of fate of the world he is in. Besides, wearing hospital gowns makes the MC look cooler and not like a mentally disabled person that escaped the mental hospital when the outbreak started, definitely not.
I didn't really mention her since you wouldn't add her to the harem...right?
4 good women? Imo, the only pretty women there are Mirage, Helen, and Violet. Who's the 4th one? Please don't tell me it's Jack's babysitter.
Oh, lmao. Seems like I accidentally skipped the chapter.
What did Max do to her? Was it mentioned and I just forgot or something?
Like I said before, I'll give another review when the fix progresses, so here I am. Writing Quality - 5/5 Grammar's good like what I said in my 1st review. Also, the author writes the POV of other characters and not just the protagonist's which I liked. Story Development - 4/5 I won't go into detail, but I'm liking where it's going after I posted my first review. Character Design - 3/5 Nothing changed. Updating Stability - 3/5 2 chaps a week is alright, I guess. World Background - 3/5 I was expecting a pure DAL story with the MC just going around other universes to go sightseeing or something. What made me rate it lower than my 1st review was the author added FGO elements, which was for me, unnecessary. The MC's going to other worlds anyway, what's the point of adding FGO elements? Could have just made him go to Nasuverse or smth. Overall, the fic's good. Sadly, I'll be ending my journey here. Adding in unnecessary stuff like fgo elements didn't fit well with me. Don't get me wrong, the fate series is one of my favorites, but I expected a pure DAL fic. In the future, I won't even be surprised if you write some bs like 'Since servants in fate are basically spirits turned into familiars, couldn't the MC make spirits like Tohka or Kurumi his servants?' or something like that.
So if he acts like a God, he'll become a God?
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How'd I repeat that, lol.
Since the author's not providing the image of the character unless the character unless the character's a harem member, I'll provide it myself.
Imo, long coat ang joggers doesn't really blend well together.
Pretty sure Shishio has red hair, same with his aunt Chihiro.
It's actually Universal Pull, iirc.
Well, since it's Christmas, why not give the author a gift. An actual review. Writing Quality - 4/5 stars. The grammar's not perfect but pretty understandable like most fics here. Story Development - 3/5 stars. The mc doesn't have a goal. And sadly, I don't know why, but I'm not really liking where the story is developing. Maybe because like I said, the MC doesn't have a goal, or at least there was nothing mentioned. He just goes with the flow of fate which doesn't really make the story 'interesting'. Initially, I was really excited about the story when I first discovered it while I was skimming through the fan-fic section. I even gave all my power stones that I have everyday but it just left me dissapointed. Character Design - 3/5 stars. The MC's a psychopath that I don't have any problem with. But there is one thing that I can't help but feel irritated. Even if the author isn't doing it openly, the MC's getting nerfed which I don't like and mostly hate second only to NTR. The MC's a half-God, but it's not showing. Like I said in a previous comment before, even if he can't control his 'God' powers right now, he should be having some passive abilities he got from being one. Updating Stability - 5/5 stars. Daily updates are awesome. World Background - 4/5 stars. Nothing really changed about the world as of right now. I'll change the review once the fic progessess more, but right now, it's...meh.