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MG_3302

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  • MG_3302
    MG_33021yr
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    Most of us are 'human zombies' driven only by the will to survive, by the lust for success, money, and fame. Reality. I feel sorry for both of the main characters. They both got lost somewhere along the way, but that's very human. There's little difference between the two. I have a very mixed impression of these two FL friends. They seem to want to help her, but are they really helping her, to find her feelings again? Pushing her, despite the values she holds, into the arms of the mysterious man. This is a very typically masculine approach. It won't solve her worries. On the contrary. What if, on top of that, she loses her self-respect? I'm waiting for the continuation. So many questions to be answered. What’s happened with her ex? Will the FL surprise the one who was the reason for this spark in her eyes?

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    Unrefusable offer
    Urban · Juliett_Juliett
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33021yr
    Posted

    It's a very promising story. I just finished ten chapters... The author knows English, I don't see any grammar or stylistic errors. The ML is expressive, and the plot interesting. Well done! <3

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    The gods: unparalleled
    Eastern · Bright Gabriel
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33021yr
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    A very nice story! Well written! [img=update] [img=update][img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]

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    Anemones
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33021yr
    Commented

    Realy? Why I don't belive Patrick :)

    “I want to learn.” He said in a firm voice, looking back at her photos. “Even if mine won’t be half as good as yours, I will still be proud that I have captured some beautiful moments that I have witnessed.”
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    The bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
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    “I don’t drink, Mr Kelly. I am enjoying the refined taste of the finest cognac.” She exclaimed, slowly tugging her glass of bright yellow liquor a little, while looking at the contents of her glass.
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    The bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented

    Who is Sam?

    “Did you forget that Sam ran away?” He looked at her wondering how much of it had her efforts in it. All of them were so close. “Besides, Patrick treats me like some kind of plague.”
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    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented
    “I respect your opinion, child, but at least you could visit me sometimes.” Mr Kelly said. After a moment of hesitation, he continued. “In secret, of course, if that is so important to you. I guess it's normal to miss you and your sister. Although, I see Patrick here sometimes.”
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    The bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented

    What is Kelly doing there?

    ‘What the fuck!’ She cursed in her mind. ‘That clown was supposed to be here after the training.’
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    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented

    Is he jealous? [img=faceslap]

    ‘Fuck! Another guy!’ Mike complained in his head. ‘Does she know only men?’
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    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented

    Nick is sly too.

    “If we don't get there on time today, I'll arrange a session for you when your hand will recover. If you really want, I'll take you to take some pictures next week.”
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    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented
    “I admit I love it, but I am not chasing an unfaithful husband with a lover, running from an enraged wife, or any criminal.”
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    The bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented

    Why does she care so much about kendo?

    Jo couldn’t accept that she would lose a few minutes of the training session, she had to find a way to avoid the heavy traffic. She took out her mobile phone and turned on her GPS app with the actual situation on the roads.
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    The bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Posted

    Gooood short story, well written! [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]

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    Short Story: A God's Point of View
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented

    [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]

    Ch 179 [Bonus chapter]I'm sorry, Dion.
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    Wild Young Princess: Mister, let's sleep?
    Urban · BAJJ
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Posted

    A very nice story! [img=update] [img=update][img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]

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    The bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented

    Will there be a new chapter today?

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    Story has been re-uploaded: "Gene Era: Breath of Evolution"
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented

    I hope there will be a happy end <3

    Ch 178 Everything will be alright, son.
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    Wild Young Princess: Mister, let's sleep?
    Urban · BAJJ
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  • MG_3302
    MG_33022yr
    Commented

    Why do you want to kill her?

    "Miss Lin... I hope you don't blame me for doing this. I know you hate seeing the young master lose his mind." His eyes that had been emotionless and compose flickered with bitterness. "I hope you find your peace."
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    Wild Young Princess: Mister, let's sleep?
    Urban · BAJJ
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