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JayDeeR

JayDeeR

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I love cats

2021-11-11 JoinedGlobal
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  • JayDeeR
    JayDeeR2yr
    Commented

    oh rip

    It was able to reflect damage 100%. Who could withstand that?
    Maxed Out My Passive Skill Due to My Laziness
    Games · No Transmigration
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  • JayDeeR
    JayDeeR2yr
    Commented

    to go with or somthin

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    Dragons Domain (draft)
    Fantasy · AngelScar
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  • JayDeeR
    JayDeeR2yr
    Commented

    saddd

    I thought this was fitting, taken my stone sad face. It made me think of Zephyr's indifferent face as I turned to stone.
    Dragons Domain (draft)
    Fantasy · AngelScar
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  • JayDeeR
    JayDeeR2yr
    Posted

    Was really interesting, there may have been a few errors and moved a little fast pace. However, the story is really nice and you do really good descriptions of characters. It also has a really nice blend of characters: a stuttering and kind dragon with a evil like father who is after his best friend. I'd say its 4/5.

    Dragons Domain (draft)
    Fantasy · AngelScar
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