Eletro101
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Eletro10113dReplied to JustABreezeOr seemingly too
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Thanks^^ yeah, it'd be 'seeming to already be'!
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Thanks, but Hotaru takes a pause in that sentence, so the comma stays.
Hotaru tilted her head and her eyes glazed over, "You don't know what exactly that authority means. In a crisis, sure, you have an overwhelming authority, but in cases where the law is handling it, it's not, the same." - Eletro1012mthReplied to Carina_Rosette
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There’s no mistake here, it’s fine; thank you
"Come on firefly~ We're already conducting an investigation without a permit. What's a few more broken rules?" her eyes sparked. - Eletro1013mthReplied to JustABreeze
Meko says one for six-five-two-three, say it aloud.
"Silly Meko, there's only four numbers, not six." - Eletro1013mthReplied to David_KillianCh 306 Going Forward (Please Read)
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Thanks^^ But I try to stay consistent with the british spelling of things instead of the american
"Dolpool University, come enrol now for spring orientation!" a woman handed fliers to anyone who entered. - Eletro1017mthReplied to The_Dark_Hydrax
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Fumeko's Dagger
The glossy magenta metal pinged onto the table. "It was made by a madman in a tent in the desert. He had no magic but this can cut through literally anything." - Eletro10111mthReplied to Lezandro
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Just to make you aware if you didn't know, when a paragraph is edited the comments on it get deleted, I have no control over it but thank you again!
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Thank you!
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- Eletro1011yrReplied to Dust_PhoenX_8732
Yup, it’s supposed to be Daiyu’s left is Jotou. I’m currently reworking a lot in Arc 4, 3 and a bit of 2. it shall be fixed and polished, thanks for the head’s up!
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There’s quite a few things I gotta fix up in Arc 3 and I have to take the time to go through and polish a lot of it. Thanks for bringing it up though!
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Yeah, I should've specified her head which does have a thick ponytail. Thanks for the input I'll correct it!
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No worries! But hey, now you know something new going forward! In any case, happy readings~
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