Well the book seems nice, I give this much on first glance, I may change it later. The writing quality though... i mean it's grammatically accurate and seems well thought out but the style lacks a bit. it's time concept is faster than normal but no problem, but it is lacking a narrative element and is a bit bland, it seems like the dialogue is monotone and how there's a lack of proper overview perspective needs more focus and there... you get the point. but hey! writing is hard! just don't give up i look forward to your work

Hmm nice but that doesn't answer the question Do you want me to help you edit and proof read or not

really good but . Needs editing; I can do it for the author they want . reply and let me know

This could have been 5 stars but the writing is too bad... do you need an editor? I can do it for you want

wise words

this world is a amazing man today woman tomorrow

however you mean

Not bad this story is a breath of fresh air for anyone looking for non-cliche Isekai but just one little problem... is the MC male or female ? really can't tell at this point, but still nice a story.[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

This chapter is slightly poor, mostly because the writing is terrible when considering that he could not get his genders straight, it is also confusing about the who bites who thing... all in all he should get an editor. but I like where he's going

Lovely story I would have loved to rate 5 stars but the writing quality is to poor, the ai edit was better but I understand and support your choice so I think I can help you with editing , it would help you get the best of both worlds and I will do it for free so if the author gets this let me know

As a man of few words I say. I see potential.

you know sometimes I read this and feel like it's AI generated but then I realize that I don't care as long as it doesn't bore me like most other novels out there so,👍👍👍

Not bad👍 but, hope it gets better 😏