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I am hooked.

Nightfall is Eve?

The unknown donor must be one of his future waifus.

Got Percy Jackson vibes from him.

The pacing is off. Other than that I really enjoyed the chapter.

ShinChan

The MC is an empty vessel? I don’t get it. Does this mean that the Protagonist has no personality? Dear Author, please tell me I am wrong.

I hope that you continue this webnovel. I really loved reading this. From the metaphors to the descriptions everything's perfect. Please Author sir/ma'am don't stop writing.

A little theory: Kairen is Chaos himself. He created those monsters himself, and he can also destroy them with a single touch. This is why he can annihilate just about anything that touches his power. And yes, I am 99.9% sure that I am wrong.

A bit more showing, a little less telling.

Dear author, I know that you may not notice this comment. But, if there's even the slightest possibility that you do (please do), I wanted to ask you what inspired you to pick the name "Sunless"? Is it a reference to Sans Soleil? BTW loved the character interactions and dialogues.