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you're a good writer(fairly), you've setup the perfect storyline and world building but u keep writing the wrong things. I know it's important to give the characters a good amount of hurdles and setbacks but at this point in this story where they are no longer facing school mates and stuck up nobles but they are practically taking on the whole world and even gods, I don't think there is time for emotional dysfunctions, and can u stop weakening the main character every time he's going to a major battle, you've come a long way with this book, your book should get better not worse, u can try reading books from other established authors like, jks manga, crimson wolf author, etc.
this chapter sends the wrong message, from the beginning of the book Rex is shown to be a no nonsense character and given the precarious situation they are currently in there is no time for jokes like messing with the impossible look the character possessed right from the start of the book