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Some of my absolute favs include: The Hitting Zone Divine Emperor Of Death Succubus Partner In The Apocalypse My Vampire System My Goalkeeping System
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Hezii_2G16dCommentedCh 411 409 Sincerity_1- Hezii_2G16dCommentedCh 1181 V4 ch29
- Hezii_2G21dReplied to LokiXavierCh 1560 Freedom of Choice
- Hezii_2G1mthReplied to Laurent_JerryAfter wasting its time for months, the shadow that had been following Cassie finally noticed something strange about her movements.
- Hezii_2G1mthCommentedCh 354 352 Conspiracy_1
- Hezii_2G1mthReplied to Galanar
I get you it just how is he supposed to be respected if he literally lets everyone walk all over him
The next moment, he took a weak punch to the ribs from Phoenix, who didn't appreciate the connotation of his joke, and a not-so-weak one to the jaw from a very pissed-off Commander Kadmus. - Hezii_2G1mthCommented
Bruh how u gonna just let a subordinate hit the king
The next moment, he took a weak punch to the ribs from Phoenix, who didn't appreciate the connotation of his joke, and a not-so-weak one to the jaw from a very pissed-off Commander Kadmus. - Hezii_2G1mthCommented
So far every female character is annoying af. Seems like all the males are pushovers and let the females act like stuck up snobs.
"No buts! If only you come back earlier then maybe we still have a choice! And what is more is, it is going to be a big waste if you didn't showcase your talent. So go now and start preparing your piece for later." yelled Shiella at Shin, ignoring his protest. - Hezii_2G1mthCommentedCh 471 Final Transform
- Hezii_2G2mthCommentedNaturally, Shye was simply all too happy to help her remove the toxins.
- Hezii_2G2mthCommentedCh 39 039 Palace Siege (Part 1)_1
- Hezii_2G5mthCommented
Dilan
Fortunately, Nial's natural regeneration was extremely high now that [Bracing Pain] augmented all of his stats by 50%. Dilan was also in possession of [Ultra Regeneration], the semi-fused Origin ability that enhanced his already high regeneration even further. - Hezii_2G5mthPosted
I personally really enjoy the story plot, however the grammar needs work. Such as misspelling and missing words to the repeating of sentences, words, and even chapters. The novel started great but after ten or so chapters the mistakes listed above made the story more difficult to follow even to the point of confusion. I feel like the plot and idea of the story are great, and if the mistakes were fixed I would 10/10 recommend. All in all I enjoyed reading it but I kind of had to numb my brain in some parts.