Great start; I like the idea of this novel; to me, it was unique. The grammar and the way the author wrote are perfect as well. Would definitely recommend for others to read as well

The story has great potential, and I love it. I can't wait to see how this will go. The writing style is excellent, and I would recommend others read this superb book.

It is one of the best books I have read so far; I could not stop reading it until I was out of chapters; I hope you keep up the excellent work.

Hello Everyone, this is my first try at writing a novel, I hope you all like it and do help me through it by pointing out the mistakes and how i can improve my writing. Thank you!