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ZephyrAudiobook

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Description I will also be posting here stuff that are not allowed on YouTube and the rest of my series hope you enjoy, There is going to be more fun here. New Youtube Channel Link - https://www.yout

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  • ZephyrAudiobook
    ZephyrAudiobook30d
    Replied to RaedaX_1

    Do you have Discord if so then Share

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    In Marvel As Dante
    Movies · RaedaX_1
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  • ZephyrAudiobook
    ZephyrAudiobook30d
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    Absolutely awesome story! I would love to see Jean and the others journeying to Limbo to battle demons and uncover Dante's past. I particularly enjoyed the dynamic between Axe/Dante and the Marvel characters, such as Tony Stark and the rest of the Avengers. As this story Available for reading on Scribble Hub or Royal Road? I'm eager to know is this an rewrite.

    Ch 64 Chapter 63
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    In Marvel As Dante
    Movies · RaedaX_1
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  • ZephyrAudiobook
    ZephyrAudiobook1yr
    Replied to ZephyrAudiobook

    Please update.

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    Weapon seller in the world of magic
    Eastern · Snowstar
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  • ZephyrAudiobook
    ZephyrAudiobook1yr
    Replied to Cyber_Shdow

    But its enjoyable, that the more important, we enjoy this story.

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    Weapon seller in the world of magic
    Eastern · Snowstar
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  • ZephyrAudiobook
    ZephyrAudiobook1yr
    Posted

    Awesome Story More plz. this is a really good story kind of fun to see how you're putting the story together it's kind of like how you're doing with it interesting and be kind of fun to see all the technology going to bring in

    altalt
    Weapon seller in the world of magic
    Eastern · Snowstar
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  • ZephyrAudiobook
    ZephyrAudiobook1yr
    Replied to Grand_Void_Daoist

    which girl did he meet her yet

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    Walker Of The Worlds
    Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • ZephyrAudiobook
    ZephyrAudiobook1yr
    Posted

    AUTHOR - Grand_Void_Daoist Awesome Story, really long it can you let us know who's the girl in the photo MC's personality changes when he met the Spider, The spider does act he is from the higher world. I'll try to continue reading if it continues being like I mean the MC is the puppet I have to let go of this novel I am at 1556 now it Awesome

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    Walker Of The Worlds
    Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • ZephyrAudiobook
    ZephyrAudiobook1yr
    Posted

    Hi Guys Zephyr here, this is an an Awesome Novel From webnovel.comby Dark_Bangali, lets Help Support the Author really love this novel[img=coins]

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    Dragon Monarch System
    Urban · Dark_Bangali
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  • ZephyrAudiobook
    ZephyrAudiobook1yr
    Posted

    This is an Awesome, Story It has a good concept (though the concept is nothing new). However, the clunky grammar, bad dialogue, flat characters (this might change in later chapters I'm not sure) really dragged it down for me. Now, I'd have liked to comment about the story (which is bland for me so far, but that's just my opinion), but I will refrain from doing so until I finish all the available chapters. ===The section below is my personal preferences only. Take it with a grain of salt=== The tense... you use present tense. It's not particularly bad, but it just feels weird, considering that a good chunk of stories here are written in past tense. The use of the so-called 'sound effects' really breaks immersion. And the thing where you said about no yuri... yeah no that's a flat-out lie. It's borderline yuri with some of the characters. === Anyways I made an account just to give this a review. Good luck on your future writing, Author.

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    Dragon Tales: Reincarnation
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