Very_Passon
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How did you butcher a single word that much?
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Inuyashiki I think. Mc was pretty awful tbh, but as I said Shishi is the goat and also kinda like the second mc, we see a lot of stuff from his pov
What does this have to do with anything? My question has nothing to do with chapters
He may be free to go...?
but that sarcasm doesnt make sense
why would you be stuck with baby food your whole life?
"Gifts" was used 4 times in this entire paragraph
Author you should try changing repeating words like "building" in this paragraph to something else with a similiar meaning cause its bad for my eyes
"Innocent"
Wasnt it supposed to be the other way around? The child got Kai's memories
"Store" used 3 times in a single paragaraph, not a good look
And ur gonna end up as a chef anyway 😐
Bruh how was name ShadowArcher not taken? This dude must have picked his name at the same time the game started but didnt play until noe
Wait... what size is her booba?
Well... kill heroine's mother and make it look like the hero did it. Problem solved👍
Author you sire took your sweet time with this chap
Wait, how big is he?
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