It's hard to do romance when you're wanted by a whole underground organization and a whole race. He also needs to find someone that can keep up with his improvement.

Seriously, are the cliches will be lesser later on? I have a hard time reading the last chapter and this one. My mind can barely tolerate it.

I want to read more but the sudden change of his character just off me.

The sudden change in demeanor and thinking made me feel awkward. It should have been like this from the start since he came from "military school".

I can't ready past chapter 20s. There are minor plotholes but the nail in the coffin is a certain local affluent family led by a general/governor of a city's local army is trying to shutdown a pavilion that has branches across the kingdoms? There's no way an army leader would be that stupid.

Average cliche one with non-chinese names but still uses the system of eastern novels. It irritates me seeing some words like "beta", "alpha", etc multiple times. I don't know but there are better ways to write than that. Everytime I saw these words, I could imagine in my prejudice that the author is a teenager without sophistication.

All of these mess are easily avoidable if he just send food to her room so she wouldn't need to come out.

I'm a new reader but this is hard to read. The MC become dumb every occasion. Someone that can produce such formation and from the outside more prosperous place and he thinks she's a normal cultivator? This plot had happened multiple times in earlier chapters. What a disappointing character that defaults into dumbery in every desperate times.

Another braindead MC. I wasted some minutes of my life reading up to this.

That's it. It's strike three for me. Too forced, or at least weird for the princess to act like that given the established story.

One chapter, he's like your innocent boy from an orphanage and another chapter like this, he's like an old cunning man who knows the ways of the world. It's a bit inconsistent.

They never learn. As if they never heard the feats done by their target. Such stupid stepping stones.

So Grey defeated those three newcomers?

Feels like we skipped several scenes. Also, as far as I remember, Grey shouldn't have an easy time blocking a peak-stage with Wind and Lightning Element. He fought someone with almost the same standard just before leaving the Dawson Family and it was not easy. Did he improve again?

Little did he know, he dodged a bullet. Lucky guy.

Another ganging up, another fieldwork. From humans to other races, the MC really liked to bet on multiple enemies.

Time for the Nether Faction to return to netherworld.

Why do I have to read this piece of abomination full of abusive scenarios and degenerating words? Did the author suffered a heartbreak in the middle of his writing?

Yeah I'm too weak so I will just say it to others first. Hahahaha

The Northern Sovereign just become suddenly idiot.