Actually both the reader and the writer benefit from it, if no one read my story, then it would be like going fishing, taking your catch to the market and not selling anything, the fish will have rotted and the fisherman will have wasted his efforts. When I refer to criticism, I refer to ideas or data that may be wrong in history, in history I applied psychology, plans, etc. The ideas that I had 2 years ago are not the same psychological ideas that I have today, in the same way my way of writing, in the last chapters there is more detail and not just leaving it to what comes out, that is why I am rewriting, Hopefully it will be mamalon. I also appreciate your comment very much.

Hello, everything is fine on my side.I already finished my university cycle, and I wrote 2 chapters.Unfortunately they are in a file on my laptop, but the laptop is serviced

very bad, moment of exams

well, I did a novel with ren in dxd

very very good

oh boy, I liked your research on the name Ren

It is a type of application where anyone can upload a story, it has a messaging function too, in Google just put that and it will appear

yes

and do you have a wattap account?

yes

well, I'm @andreloco15

umm... do you have any way to message me? Writing details about Ren in the comments seems similar to a chef telling his secret recipe in a Facebook post, it makes me a little uncomfortable.

If you want to do it, go ahead, I'm curious about your ideas for my character, and you can ask me questions about Ren if you like, as long as you don't try to steal him from me, that's fine.

The two are completely different stories, but if I had to say something about the two, it is that the first is a story of Ren who dies for the first time and transmigrates into an online game world, and the other is a more mature Ren with more lives behind the one who reincarnates in a harem novel, they are 2 different styles and completely different plots in the same way.

My dear follower, how are you? it would be a pleasure to meet you

a bit tired from university, but the rest was fine, I did the story for fun and a hobby.

On the contrary, I am grateful to have a fan who is waiting for my story so far and I am sorry to disappoint you for not managing my time well to write more chapters.

I have a curious question, what do you like about my story? If you can do a review, I would really appreciate it.

As I said, Ren is someone who does things because he can and wants to, you can't put limits on Ren, such as what it would cost him his life or how much money it would cost him to do such a thing, Ren is not someone who cares if he dies doing what he wants to do. Ren decided to give his heart to Saiko because he knows Saiko's suffering off-screen, ren felt empathy for that kind of person and decided to help her, he doesn't do it because he wants to get something from her, apart from the fact that it will be fun for him. meeting a dragon in the process. I understand your point about Kumiko and another man's wife, ren became emotionally attached to that girl in the sense that he can understand her since he sees his little sister in Kumiko, and I repeat it again, there will be many more women besides Kumiko, let's say that I didn't abandon the character of kiriko, leaving him without a woman like other mc who take all the women and leave the former protagonist as a kind guy and with nothing, my story goes on the march and it's a story to create the character Ren Artega, even so, thank you very much for your opinion, I will consider giving more appearance to the other girls and not so much to Kumiko since she took her way, although other girls and more girls will appear later, which in my opinion is interesting, What if I must apologize for the bad grammar, English is not my first language nor the best.

Thanks for your opinion towards the character Ren, I really appreciate your opinion, if I had to say something, it's that I wanted Ren to be someone a bit out of common sense, in chapter 100 there is a summary of each character if you want to know about why that ren is like that, but really ren does not do those things like conquering heroines just because they are beautiful, he does not move with testosterone working, he does things for the simple fact that he wants to, either because he finds it funny or because it reminds him of some trauma from the past or something like that, Ren reached the pinnacle of humanity in his old life, he had all the power in the world and it cost him everything, that's why ren isn't interested in getting all the power. ren was never very interested in getting money because for him money is just a means to an end, for him it is easy to get a lot of money, but he is not interested in the fact that ren does not like to attract attention if you are looking for an mc who covets all wealth and all women, so I think that my mc will not be to your liking nor will I be able to change it, although a detail would be that ren will have more than one wife, not for that reason every girl who appears is going to fall in love with him ren, Kumiko is a clear example of that.