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DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommentedLu Xiu: How to praise an 18 year old girl that you have no interest, but your younger brother want to get closer to her "fake" sister so you have no other choice.
He had already said all the praises he knew today. He had to go online tonight to find out what else he could say.- DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommented
Cheng Ling: And that's how you Tame CEOs and billionaires.
Lu Xiu was munching on the melon seeds like a squirrel. "Of course! Is there anything more important than plowing the land now?! If we don't have hoes, there are still many more in the car at the back!" - DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommented"Do you have a hoe here?" Lu Xiu asked anxiously with a very serious expression.
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommentedCheng Ling had already started digging a hole. When she heard Lu Dong's words, she didn't even raise her head and lightly replied, "You're a man. Why are you so talkative? If you want to dig, then you dig. If not, you can just leave."
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommented"Can you not do it here?"Both of Cheng Ling's hands were preoccupied, so she used her chin to point at a place three meters away from them. She hadn't had the time to cultivate that place yet, so they could do whatever they wanted. "You guys go over there. You're blocking my farming here."
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrPosted
First things first, I must say that the writing style is pretty good, it's easy to understand and it's well organized so we don't get lost between thoughts, narrations and dialogs. Secondly, I also enjoyed the way the MC is personally was displayed, after all in the sinopse it's clear that she will have a cold personally and the author captured it's essence really well - I'm writing this because I've recently read one novel that told the MC was cold and emotionless, but it's author wasn't able to develop it and the novel became a trash to read - and even when she encountered with her mate it still wasn't a deception, 'cause the author didn't mixed the MC feelings for her mate with other people around (like beginning to be good to others just for her mate or to show more expressions with people that are not her mate, etc) Thirdly, I just want to warn that the update stability is low and it takes a really good Wille to read another chapter. Taking this last remark of consideration it's an awesome novel!!!!!
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrPosted
First things first, I'm really pleased with the writing style of this novel, it's easy to identify the dialogs, thinking and narrations spaces. Even if sometimes one word or another thing is out of line this problem almost never appears. Secondly, the MC development is going pretty well, she's an strong personality and we can clearly see the kind of person she is. It’s also so much fun to read her teasing her targets (the goods and bads in their own way), and I have a lot of expectations for the future chapters!!!! Thirdly, the only complaint I have is the update stability since it take a Wille for the author to post, bit I understand that he/she must have other things to worry in his/her life so I let it pass and use this time to search for more novels to read!!!!
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommented"He was a girl!? Noo!" One girl yelled out in disappointment. It seemed like she had lost all the strength in her body as she slumped to the floor.
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommented
Your Yuki? You mean OUR Yuri, don't you?
"Well. You really have no need to hide your real identity, right? Just wear your hat and mask as normal but let your hair down. It would be very amusing to see how people react. Especially those girls who keep talking about how cute you are." Trisha's last words were her real objective; she just wanted those girls to stop ogling her Yuki. - DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommented
Let me reformulate: "...She's not in love with Trisha YET..."
Yuki smiled and leaned in and kissed Trisha's lips lightly. "I am happy too." Yuki was indeed happy. Although she was not in love with Trisha, she did like her. Whether it was just as friends or more, she wanted Trisha to be happy. She now understood why Chi and Trisha seemed so alike, and that was because they were the same person. - DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommentedYuki's cheeks blushed. She could feel Trisha's heart pounding through her chest. Or maybe it was her own heart, but when she saw those eyes that were begging for a truthful answer, Yuki could only simply nod her head. "Mmm… I am… Trisha, about last night I..." Yuki's eyes went wide as she felt something soft pressed against her lips. It was like an atomic bomb went off inside her head. Trisha had actually kissed her! As their lips lingered together, Yuki's eyes slowly closed and began kissing Trisha back. She did not know why this felt so right, but it did.
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommentedYuki's body froze. It was as if time had stopped. Her brain had basically stopped functioning. She had thought since Chi was in game, a person she would never meet, it would be fine to just forget about the situation that happened. But now… Now she could not do that because the very person she had done such intimate things with was next to her naked. Only one thing came to mind at this time. "I-I don't know any Chi!"
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommented
Don't worry your not friends anymore !!!!! You're already a married couple !!!!!
"Mmm.." Chi smiled shyly. She then leaned down and hugged Ryu. "Ryu, thank you for always being so concerned about me and treating me so well. I do not deserve a friend like you." - DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommentedTurning back time a few minutes. Trisha was lost in thought as she sat on her bed. It had been bothering her all day that any time she looked at Yuki, Ryu's face overlapped with hers. It was also the same for when she looked at Ryu's face, Yuki's face would overlap with his. "What if… This is a big what if… What if Yuki was playing a male character?" This thought suddenly came to mind. When she thought about it, it seemed like something Yuki would do. "If Ryu is Yuki… Then the feelings that have been forming for Ryu are my feelings for Yuki…?"
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommentedYuki looked down at Chi, and a grin appeared on her face as she lowered it closer to Chi's. When she saw Chi's face become even redder than before, she whispered: "How long do you wish for me to hold you?"
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommented
I'm happy
Behind them, the Sky King was giving chase, not wanting to let Yuki getaway. Yuki, on the other hand, ran straight towards KillerT and began yelling out: "KillerT, I did what you asked of me and attacked the Sky King. Here it comes. Remember how you told me you would kill the Sky King then force his wife to submit? And even make his children work in a factory? Well, here is your chance!" - DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommentedYuki looked at the massive bird in front of her that was about 4 times her size and frowned. If that thing had swooped down to attack them, it would not have been good! The bird flopped around a bit before finally getting back on its feet and staring at Yuki with murderous eyes. The monsters that had been chasing her suddenly began slowly backing away. They seemed to be frightened by the massive bird. Yuki looked at the name over its head and knew it was not a normal monster. "Sky King Fermoth. I think this is a Field Boss!"
- DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommented
~This fella is already dead, they just didn't warn him~
"Oh? To think you two were such a beautiful couple. Too bad you two are going to die today. Well maybe I will keep the girl alive and play with her a bit before she dies. Hahaha!" Blade gave an evil smile as he swung his sword at Yuki. - DaoistZUC6gE2yrCommentedYuki sighed and moved Chi with her as she moved to the side, so they were not standing at the entrance of the inn. She stood there and scratched between Chi's ears to help calm her nerves. Only after a few minutes did Yuki see Chi's tail begin to wag. "Feeling better?"