I hate arrogant Characters

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Can you update a bit faster? I understand that you’re a student but if you can release 1 chapter daily it would be amazing :)

Yeah

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Maze dungeon?

Issssss SYSTEM

So when will Veronica get a huge buff? Everyone in the kingdom has now almost the same armor and weapons made from her armor. Kinda boring but I’m looking forward when she gets a buff, a huge one maybe

Bruh don’t be a living fortress, sounds kinda boring.

I have read some of his novel and I say it’s really good especially Epic if caterpillar one of my favourites. This novel resembles a lot. I remember Kirina I think her name is got summoned by Ervas and Veronica. Although Veronica is the mc I can’t but feel that she got less screen time than Ervas. Overall the story is good, good progression, some wrong grammar like: he, she it etc. good work author

Ghoul tribe is proud of their strength and yet Veronica acts weak to gain their favour?

Maybe explain what those blessings and divine protection does. The effects and such?

I don’t like the idea of Ervas learning soul break. It’s hard it explain but it’s like he’s taking everything that’s special from Veronica making her feel less unique u know what I mean. It’s already kinda unfair with that mana.

Not to sound rude or anything but isn’t it a bit unfair with Ervas skills and that ridicules mp no? Veronica got nothing except for decent speed and high defense. Isn’t she the mc? Ervas is basically overpowered already with how he constantly regnerate mp and can spam spells. Easy lv up. While Veronica have to do some work while being a bit weak compared to Ervas.

I don’t know about y’all but I think they should head back to the dungeon where Veronica came from. Ervan has a rage amount of mp, and their party is already strong at a average rank4. The dungeon contains armor and minerals which is the perfect place for Veronica to get stronger. My opinion tho

Make Veronica more op😩

Veronica is the mc right? Ervan is overpowered right now, with millions of mana and can control plants and dead corpses while Veronica gets a shield. A strong shield with armory skill. That’s the mc for you!

Ervas more powerful than mc ;(

Flexible armor is better than flexible shields suppose

Armor*