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didn't she have that thing that stopped her from aging?
Derel???
i think the author means that lee could break his own ribs, not Ning's
portal to kumia
nah. he's still hiding his strength, although unintentionally. i believe we're missing a few thousand Sss's
the author did mention in a past comment that the next volume will have aspects of kingdom building. i think theres a chance that the mc will leave his family by the end of this volume.
I love this novel, and I'm certain that it's going to be one of the best on this app. Let me break it down. Writing quality: 5/5 The writing quality is spectacular. It has good grammar (surprising for a webnovel novel), great word play that makes sentences flow smoothly, and even better descriptions (if the synopsis doesn't show you that already). The fight scenes are incredibly done too. I don't know how the author did it, but some fights feel like they come to life, while others have been written in a way that allows you to put yourself in the place of the mc. Story Development: 5/5 The pacing is amazing! The author doesn't tell you more than you need to know. Its pacing is incredible especially for a reincarnation story, since most other stories either cut to the mc being 14+ years old or take far too long describing the younger years of the mc. The author has somehow found a cozy middle area where it isn't too slow to the point you get bored, and isn't too fast to the point where the author is skipping many things that should be explained. Character Designs: 5/5 The characters not only feel alive, they also feel real. The interactions between the MC's parents feel real. The emotions and reactions feel real. The characters are also very likable. Silas (the mc) has an older sister, but unlike many of the novels on here, she isn't annoying. she's real, and extremely likable at that. The father is kind of goofy but can be serious, the mother is strict but she makes mistakes of her own and is called out for it. The grandmother is a little bit of a D to everyone as she always makes random funny but rude comments (doesn't care about etiquette), but she's been shown to care for her grandchildren. The mc himself is flawed. he isn't social but he tries. He regrets things about his past, but he's still ruthless and doesn't regret many of the things we would have considered "bad". he has his own moral compass, and I love that about him. Updating Stability: 5/5 7 times a week, long chapters. Something always happens in each chapter, making them feel unique and worth the read. World Background: 5/5 The world feels large. the magic system is big, but not complete. The main character is a scientist, so I can only assume that in the future he will add new things to the magic system and make new discoveries. He even mentions that the magic system is "too limiting" and that he will have to change it. He also mentions that he will use mana for technological advancements he was unable to complete in his past life, and since this novel had kingdom building as one of the tags, you can see in what direction this might go. On the discord server, the author has also stated that there is much more about the world that we still don't know, so I'm waiting for that but I'm certain it will be amazing. 5/5 overall, great novel so far. i can only hope for its success so more people can witness it.
I think this chapter might be one of the best ones so far. Yes, there is no action, but it truly portrays how intelligent Lloyd is and how manipulative he can be. The one consistency throughout this entire chapter wad the fact that Lloyd "Knew" all the outcomes and how everyone felt. Lloyd "knew" what their classes and personalities were after looking at them once, and Lloyd "knew" that he could tip the scaled in his favor by breaking Lachlan's character down despite having only met him. I love this chapter so please author, keep it up! 💯
This is definitely one of the better novels on webnovel. It has long chapters, it uploads every day, and the story is enjoyable!👍 The writing quality is close to immaculate except a few spelling mistakes here and there. I also love how the author made up sayings like "right off the stars" instead of "right off the bat." It really flushes out the idea of this being in the future with sci-fi aspects in the novel. the characters feel thought out, especially the main character. There is both depth and mystery behind the main character, yet his reactions to things seem both realistic but eerily weird at the same time. So far, we know enough about the world for us to form a setting. We don't know too much, but we know just enough for us to not have to question certain actions. Overall 10/10
Rubert*
cool eye color tbh