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Dutch_Psychedelics1yrCommentedI expect this to never be read, but basically a personality influencing arc is in it's essence something I don't like (i still read it cause the story overall is awesome so far but...). You basically have the whole book getting attached to the character and it's personality just for that to change to someone unlikable. It's like book with several points of view, where one character is always annoying to read because the story of the other one is currently more interesting, but even worse cause it is actually that same character. So you just have to the desire to get it over with, but can't cause you don't want to miss stuff. And THAT makes it just plain uncomfortable no matter how good it is written so... even with good writing just annoying arcs.
If you guys were to do a personality change storyline or a plot where MC's personality was being manipulated, how would you do it? I'm not asking this for any form of retaliation or not willing to accept that someone didn't like my writing— I know that I can't please everyone, everyone has their likes/dislikes, and that my readers not enjoying what I write is also my fault.- Dutch_Psychedelics1yrCommented
How can you just throw away a twist like that?!?? it better be good now
Aksel Thorn - Bodyguard - In the initial drafts, he had assassinated Quinn's parents on a hit paid by Brio Abate. - Dutch_Psychedelics1yrCommented
I'm honestly shocked this wasn't referenced before
Hogwarts had been appropriately represented. And it had been represented with style. - Dutch_Psychedelics1yrCommented
"Jede Zelle meines Körpers is glücklich...", . . . . . Congrats to the german readers who are gonna have this song stuck in their head now
Not a single cell in Quinn's body was left behind. Every cell in his body was being filled with a never seen before vitality. - Dutch_Psychedelics1yrCommentedAnd to my abhorrently bad luck, a truck came into view from a blind corner. As my body continued to fall forward, it was like time slowed down. And my life began to flash before my eyes.
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I thought his home had sentimental value? Feels kinda off for him to replace it just like that
Quinn started from the Great Hall and then explored the castle for the entire day but could only cover the ground and the first floor. The castle was so large that Quinn wasn't able to move past the first floor. And Quinn was planning to memorize the entire castle. Quinn would live here for the next seven years, and because of that, he wanted to use the castle and the accompanying property as his new mindscape. He knew the transition from the West Manor to the Hogwarts castle would be gradual and a lengthy process. But, Quinn was confident that he would be able to explore enough of the castle in a year or two to build a working model in his mind. And, who knew what level of detail could he accomplish in seven years. - Dutch_Psychedelics1yrCommentedCh 180 Fate’s a Bitch
- Dutch_Psychedelics1yrReplied to segway_jon
He forgot everything AFTER the conversation, not the conversation itself
The woman walked away and slowly exited the room, leaving a shaken billionaire lost in his thoughts. That woman had looked through his mask and saw everything he wanted to hide even from himself. The last Stark decided to deal with it the way he does best, with a bottle in hand. The following morning, he could not remember what happened after the woman left. - Dutch_Psychedelics1yrCommented
I mean by now she hasn't sensed something so often that one wonders if she does at all...
This man had split his soul, I hadn't seen anything like it in the past and I should have sensed this travesty over magic when it occurred. This was troubling. - Dutch_Psychedelics1yrReplied to GrimmWulffThe name is somewhat familiar, but I can't think of it off the top of my head, but unlike the other murders, Ekrizdis didn't steal a book or an artifact, this was personal. We discovered that the victim was a wizard called Janus Diggory. After some research, we found out that he was a magical researcher that focused on the soul. He had a partner, who Salazar identified as the man that killed his family, Ekrizdis. As wizards always do, they were trying to achieve immortality. People really need to start being original, this was getting old.
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I found his true nemesis
BAAM! a blue light flowed through the tips of my finger and the general area around the marker exploded.