Approximately what chapter would it be?

Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?

Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?

Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?

Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?

Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?

Do you have discord or a place where you save the images? Do you have discord or a place where you save the images? Do you have discord or a place where you save the images?

Don't even bother reading this FF, the ending is terrible.

I was planning to create a story similar to yours, of course it won't be the same, but the central idea would be, Game maker, so I wanted to ask you if you wouldn't mind if I use your idea to create my own FF?

Almost 5 Stars from me. One of the best TWD FF I've ever read. Although there are debatable points, that is not a very big problem since there are always disagreements with a story, in my opinion it has a very consistent and organic development, a system that, although it is a central point of the FF, does not take up much of the time. Mc and is proportional to the difficulty of the world, which does not make the mc too OP and a slave to the system, the character development is also one of the best I have seen and puts the points in place about what it is like to live in a world apocalyptic, overcoming his past traumas little by little and realistically. The development of the world is progressive and constant, which gives a solid image of the future. The only thing I would argue is how little he lacks his knowledge from his previous life, he should know that it is essential to pay more attention to firepower, I don't understand why he doesn't visit Fort Benning and take the weapons that were probably abandoned there and thus strengthening your base.

Did his life move you? So what about those who live worse than the MC, be more realistic and just say that he is their guardian angel and was randomly selected to change the world or something like that.

Mc too perfect, romance too fast, no character development, terrible, honestly I only read this because of the ff topic, which is about game development

Dear author, could you tell me at what point in your novel, does Mc fix himself and stop being a coward and tell the truth to Sora, Yukino and his friends?

Did I develop another personality due to some trauma?

Too many cliche tropes, how can you know by instinct that you can override your will to reality? Has no sense

He said he felt the weight of his actions and the political problems there about a dozen times, he literally says it every two paragraphs, it's getting annoying. It is enough for me to say it only once and not throughout the entire chapter as in the previous one, if the rest of the chapters are like that, I will abandon it. Seriously, it's not that I want to give bad comments or be a hater, but this ruins the entire FF, I ask you to please seriously reflect on what you are writing.

Those dialogues are terribly forced, Marla just needed to be told go away and she began to question all her actions and she simply left, there was no conversation at all, I sincerely recommend that you relate the surroundings, the reactions and possible thoughts, do not do it as if they dialogues were from a video game, it takes away the realistic feeling of the story. That is my recommendation since the FF is very good and promising but those errors take away points that would otherwise be favorable.

The grammar errors and plot holes are giving me a headache. First they ask him how he is so intelligent and then they tell him that they know they are prodigies, I don't understand you author.

Más te vale que Alex no lo engañe durante su despedida de soltera

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