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This was all so forced. You could have been more original author, so far nothing important has changed in the story, besides it seems that common people are blind to Anos' power, he has already shown several powers that no one has ever used and yet people see him as a weak commoner who is lucky
My problem with this story is that the protagonist gets beaten in every fight he has in the story, he literally only won one fight and was humiliated in the rest. The story has other problems but that was what bothered me the most. Being honest, in my opinion the highlight of this fanfic is the romance between MC and Maki, in my opinion the development is perfect
Honestly, what a disappointment, I think I'm abandoning this fanfic. In addition to the protagonist only losing all the battles, the author doesn't have the courage to change the story, and now to make everything worse, the author added a super strong character to humiliate the MC again and he needs to be saved or the enemy lets him escape. The story is so obvious and repetitive that it becomes irritating. Who knows I'll come back another time to continue reading, but for now I can