very interesting, the character background was well established and the writer was not to set on it. She wrote about it, explained it and then explained how the story started. The later books is so far very good and the character development is good. In some places the writer does not 'intervene' when one of the characters are talking when something good or interesting/bizarre happens. As i have only reached i think it was 52, As I am busy with a different book as my main read at this moment and only found a random pass to read a locked chapter, I have reread the firts 51 chapters. Awesome book and keep it up Author! ps. love the system. want to see their relationship also a bit of NSFW happenings but not to much. love reading nsfw but good to see a balance. keep it up.

the story is good, confusing and some of the spelling mistakes and error in grammar can be a bit confusing but other wise a good story. it does move abit fast though

it is getting confusing when she is addressed as he...

very good and a fun read, i am curioe in how the relationship between the elf and the snake girl will be heading or even when she gets her revenge against her family

this is quite interesting...

oemf

'must be from mom's side's' obviously xD

I love this, the background is amazing. I can really see the place the way the writer described it. the characters are amazing I really love the main girl and can use my imagination with only a small description. atm I am not that far yet but the book really is amazing this far and reccomend it. if this is gibberish it is because I am still half asleep