The grammar/English is impeccable haven’t found any big problems to date At least one chap a day with very rare exceptions so can’t complain about that either I love the story development any Star Wars fan would love it and he’s staying original to I love most of the character designs with a couple of exceptions(not the main characters) And it’s a a StarWars fanfic so you already know it has a great world background Overall 10/10 novel keep up the good work author

Thx for the chap

Thx for the chap