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I think something's wrong with the server links. I tried to join again, but it still didn’t work. A friend of mine tried it as well, but it still didn’t work. If you don’t mind, could you add me on Discord and send an invite link through that? It would be great. Here is my Discord username: khan_1.

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When I try to join, it says the link is invalid or expired. Can you create a new one?

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Well, you could say that, but I mostly meant in general more description would be better for a novel. But your novel already is leagues above others. But if you want to improve it, more description would be better or let your writing grow as you write, since you have just started it and this is your first novel. Don’t pressure yourself. I think your writing right now is very good.

More detailed chapters would be better.