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SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommentedWrong name here.
Wang Anhua, who was among the crowd, looked at the trap formation Fang Zhengzhi drew and his eyes instantly lit up brightly. Taking a few steps out of the crowd, Village Chief took over the illustration from Village Chief Meng Bai and studied it carefully.- SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
This is not correct btw. True war smoke rushes up, as all hot air does. But cold air sinks. Unless the smoke was hot it would not rise upwards unless taken by the wind.
Compared to standing on top and suffocating for half an hour, they honestly rather waited in the traps. At least, smoke rises upwards, it was actually quite comfortable inside the traps. - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
This is foolish...
When the Southern Mountain Village witnessed this, they were instantly triggered. - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
who is this Roger Roger? i seen droids say it in starwars
"Roger, roger... thank you Missus!" Village Chief Meng Bai immediately bowed in gratitude, his back was thoroughly soaked with sweat, yet he couldn’t muster the courage to wipe it. - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
bruh...
"Hehe …" Yue Lingyu was tickled by Ye Yuan, giving off silver bells-like laughter. - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
Such a shame that such a great chapter is being brought low by something as simple as this...
"I finally waited until you came!" - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
Asians and sexism go hand in hand. Call me a racist if you feel that it is called for, but at least I am no sexist.
Wu He shot Shao Kai a glance and said disdainfully, "Humph! So what if bullying you? Shao Kai, you're also someone capable at any rate, you're actually working under a broad.[1] I really feel ashamed for you!" - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
I can already see how he tries to capture the tiger boi or Ye Yuan...
This fellow did not follow conventional thinking and loved to capture members of the demon race to extract and refine divine beast bloodline, wanting to obtain genuine divine beast blood essence through this sort of method. - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
remove "suddenly" it is redundant, you already state that it happens fast and unexpected when you say "abruptly"
Suddenly, Ye Yuan's aura abruptly erupted. - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
"shockingly" read the sentence aloud without "shockingly" you will see instant improvement
And the target of these countless rays of light was shockingly precisely Ye Yuan! - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
She barely said a sentence before saying enough talk? Is inteoducing oneself wrong now too?
The three people were just speaking when a coquettish madam walked up to the stage and said in a clear voice, "Appreciate everyone honoring with a visit, coming to our Heaven's Destiny Auction. This lowly self is Cai Yue. I believe that friends who frequently come to the Heaven's Destiny Auctions won't be unacquainted with this lowly self. Enough talk, we'd better go into the main topic. Today's auction items have a total of 13 articles. I believe that everyone came today for that finale holy artifact at the end. As for what that holy artifact is, allow this lowly self to keep you guessing and leave it till the end to unveil!" - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
consider me confused
The Heaven's Destiny Trading Company was a Rank One Holy Land; much more powerful than the Crimson Afterglow Holy Land, this sort of Rank Nine Holy Land.[1] - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
how does he know he is an alchemist?
How was this some Divine Traversing Realm brat? This was simply a peak Alchemy Emperor old freak! - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
guess we either skipped something or its miss translated
At the same time, Ye Yuan activated the Kun Peng bloodline in his body frenziedly. Coupled with the Wind-Thunder Extreme Light Shuttling Art, his speed immediately surged immensely! - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
myriad Rain of blades pls change it to this
"Azure Dipper Floating Zero Sword . . . Myriad Rain Sword Blades!" - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
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"Only now do I know where Ye Yuan's confidence came from! Everybody was mocking him at the beginning. Now, it looks like we were the fools! With strength like his, so what if he is the first one on stage?" - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
Hes gonna die Anyway... Cant he sit still???
He pulled on Ye Yuan's sleeve desperately. But Ye Yuan directly ignored him. - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
boooooooo bad plot
Li-er sighed lightly and said, "You have done enough already!" - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommented
You say it is the final four, but there are clearly there people not four.
Tian Yu, Tang Yu-er, and Ye Yuan entered the final four, while Luo Chengfeng was tragically eliminated, blocked outside the final four. - SinnermanTheAuthor2yrCommentedCh 193 Don’t Interfere With My Posturing!