Update

Well I have read till latest chapter and all can say that this fan-fic is promising and can be a good action-harem novel with some adult content and after reading author's previous work, all I can say is that he will not disappoint us. So give it a try.

man entire chapter for single character, she must be pretty important then huh, gotta keep an eye

mistake author

hats off author it was really funny

You have my appreciation for your efforts, I extremely enjoyed your story. All the best for your next work.

It was excellent, it was really giving me overlord feel. Just sometime keep pov to 1st person to understand characters thoughts and their reasons. And keep chapters long.

no

+1

flag

nope

I suddenly feel feel bad for him, dispite his ulterior motives 😔

that's scary thought process 😱

this changes whole Arc. I look forward to it.

Draw sword guild is already delusional thinking they have already weakened Korea as a whole due to their pride in the guild for having the greatest no. of S rank hunters and their belief in their leader (goto), so they will be haughty and will look down on other hunters. Our mc is also mixed so they will either look out for mc to have him on their side or will do exactly the opposite if doesn't listen to them. As mc is a new hunter, it's given everyone will look down on him except a few and will try their luck there to make them feel good or to establish an illusionary hierarchy So if you think about it this scene has great potential. I think you're not sticking to original so I think it will be great to start your own from here bit by bit.

too short I guess

it's nice to know about side characters👍

next time dao of face slapping, be ready boys🤣

two is enough, no need to make cliche harem story.

no that's plot twist between happy go lucky moments