Mugiwara_no_Ramen
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2021-10-15 JoinedSenegal
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Mugiwara_no_Ramen1yrCommentedtoo much exposure
"When will those pricks learn how to properly listen to me? I'm the boss for heaven's sake. Who do they think made the Harrier Industries to where it is now huh? I should be in my house enjoying a lone quiet life but here I am heading to the lab to fix the billion-dollar mistake. Ah...those stupid board members," Thomas clicked his tongue, venting out the frustration he had accumulated from running the company ever since his succession.- Mugiwara_no_Ramen1yrCommented
exposition
"Bro Wushuang, how long does it take you to finish the Aurora Sword Arts? Within 30 breaths?" Jian Meng'er asked. - Mugiwara_no_Ramen1yrCommented
too much exposition
"Thanks for your help, without you I could not have reached the Profound level in this short period of two months," Jian Meng'er said. - Mugiwara_no_Ramen1yrCommented
Why the rush tough The world building is impressive it's a waste not to explore it and make it more alive. Same thing with the character don't make them NPC. And the Tyo perspective on this story could have been great like when a family or a child is crushed on SNK Keep the good work it's a great story and looking forward to where it's going
Ch 53 Long-term - Mugiwara_no_Ramen1yrCommented
did he forget about his mother again
"Back to work," Alexander muttered, and reconnected to the game. - Mugiwara_no_Ramen1yrCommentedCh 418 Plans and Media Attention