The story started off as good as possible, I liked every single word of each chapter, there's only one thing that bothers me; the part about Arthur overpowering Davina's family; I think that was kinda rushed, but the story's still one of the best novels I've ever read. I can't wait for more chaps!

I like the story, also how things are going; In general. everything is happening super fast. It would have been better to explain more about the new characters and describe events further more, the world background too.