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Ai_Gel

Ai_Gel

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2021-10-11 JoinedGlobal
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  • Ai_Gel
    Ai_Gel2yr
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    This is a very interesting Chapter. I believe Talia plays a very important role in this narrative. This is a big twist I didn't see coming. The previous chapter of Marcy and that of the Omega should have been enough warning for me. Carry on writing.[img=update]

    Ch 10 Caught in the act
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    The Alpha's Bride
    Fantasy · RedSonia
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  • Ai_Gel
    Ai_Gel2yr
    Commented

    The first chapter gave a great "hook" which draw me in. I like the pacing of the narrative. The heroine was well presented and I like the way her POV is presented. The male character's presentation gave me, as a reader, the desire to read more. Keep on writing.

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Trinity Mountains
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    The Alpha's Curse
    Fantasy · Kianna Walpole
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  • Ai_Gel
    Ai_Gel2yr
    Commented

    I say wow. Congratulations. Rhian and Angelo are well developed characters with enough hint for me to want to read more. The POVs are also well presented. I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

    Ch 4 Satan
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    WHOSE ALPHA?
    Fantasy · she_osprey
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  • Ai_Gel
    Ai_Gel2yr
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    The heroine is developed enough to peak my interest. As her story unfolds, I am hooked at the way the author draws her qualities and, in a way reveal piece by piece, her personality. Meanwhile, the villain is not so well- defined yet. It would be interesting to know how the heroine will face her adversary. Keep on writing.

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    Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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