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BEGINNING IS GOOD, OTHERWISE ITS FILLERS AND THANKS FOR POWER STONES..., AUTHOR HAS TALENT BUT KEEPS MAKING SHIT DICISIONS THE MAIN DRIVE FOR WRITING IS GETTING READERS TO PAY. ITS MONEY DRIVEN THE STRORRY LOST ITS MEANING LONG TIME AGO, AUTHOR IS INCONSISTENT ; HE WANTS MC TO BE OVERPOWERED YET WEAK AT THE SAME TIME NOT THE MENTION THE FORCED ROMANCE AND MISUNDERSTANDING OR THE SAME FACTS HE WANTS READERS TO BELIEVE (LIKE BRAIN WASHING 7 YEARS OLD CHILDREN) THAT HE KEEPS REPEATING OVER AND OVER U CAN READ THIS NOVEL ITS EXCITING EARLY ON BUT IT TURNS QUICKLY INTO DISAPOINTMENT AND FRUSTRATION