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This is so true
Oh my gosh this is so funny!!
Oh my god, I just spit out my coffee
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That was actually pretty funny
Here is my feedback, don’t do other perspectives (third person etc) it ruins the pacing of the story. Good novels don’t do that. Keep up with regular posts and story will do well. Another thing, don’t let things ramp up too quickly. I feel like story has already massively increased in pace
Aaaaand we are back to Mongrol being weaver
I mean it’s basically already true… they are just a little subtle about it
Good first paragraph
Idiot
Oh thank you so much for explaining this, I was in torment thinking that the story had not followed its own rules
Ist scenes like this that make the story great
This is so clever and amazing how author can tie these things together
You mean… like in every cultivation novel?