Arigato!!!

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Thenk you

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I like everything. I don't care about the grammar because I read worse (Chinese fanfic and translated through Google translate) and so all well interesting idea and yes I also do not know English well. But the piece itself is good

It's a worthy start. I love the way the author writes this, and this story has a good start. Noksus. Noksus. Noksus Noksus. Noks. us

Thanks for the chapter 🤩🤩🤩

I like the novella, I hope you don't quit this novella. (:-NOKSUS_NOKSUS-:) (:-NOKSUS_NOKSUS-:) (:-NOKSUS_NOKSUS-:) (:-NOKSUS_NOKSUS-:) (:-NOKSUS_NOKSUS-:) (:-NOKSUS_NOKSUS-:) (:-NOKSUS_NOKSUS-:)

Thanks for the translation I really like this novella. I have read many times on Chinese sites and there is complete confusion but you translate and relactify I do not understand why people do not like it so much but I like you normally translate.

Y Y I hope you start writing this novel T T

English is not my native language. Thanks for the chapter. I'm waiting for the chapter. Give at least a small hint of the following template

Если я слишком груба сделала отзыв простите меня никогда так раздражало главный герой и я тогда не прочитала комментарий снизу раз это только идея то нормально

English is not my native language. It annoys me that the protagonist is nobody. the feeling that he is under the control of Agaroma. He makes a decision only on behalf of. except 3 wishes. He is constantly being pointed out. most importantly, it is considered normal for him not to have the right to freedom of action, he is even forbidden to interfere in the conspiracy, except when Agaroma pointed to the action. Agaroma is not a god, he is not the strongest. Hagaroma is not strong for the OtsutsuOther things aren't as irritable, and that's most likely a fetish. In this fanfic, the protagonist is a puppet, and I explained that. But still, the quality of the narrative is bad because of the protagonist. The narrative itself (not the main character) cannot be judged specifically, because you are writing for the first time.

This fanfic has room to grow, but it's unclear if it's going to be good or not

I liked this story there is a pity that they abandoned but I hope the author continues. Most fanfinks merge stories first because of illogicality, but it's more or less normal here