ISHAN_MISRA
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intersting he is , reincarnated this one is
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np just confirm the realms and just stick to it
np just correct them if any reader points out as it's gets enjoyanble for latecomers
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ooh no problem just it disturb the rhythm while reading and I can understand ur writing your first novel so i just feel like to correct these mistakes
ooh then u can ask the reader to find them while reading the u can edit the mistake
ok but plz try to give depth to the details as it seems character don't pay attention to common knowledge
yes , u see I can understand the empathise your attepmptto give side character some emotion by writing (all work go down the drain) but it should be more natural with the paragraph and interaction inbetween characters
ooh
plz explain power system
author confirm the name of realm ,some time use 3rd mage rank and such but sometimes kingdom . It's gets really annoying and with mistakes of pronoun makes reading experience quite bad
it's plane dumb not setback