I dislike this. Batman has no right to demand from Eli and Eli shouldn't have answered without getting something in return. Author, do better please. I get that you want him in the young justice team but certainly there are better ways to integrate him into the team. A connection with Dr fate or Zatara could have done the trick not being a Batman gopher.

I'm disappointed and my day is already ruined. I will be stopping here with this story. I won't be removing it from my library because I hope the author will rectify this mistake in the future but for now, I will abstain. I loved your story up to this point Author-san and I hope you don't feel less motivated from this comment. Ciao 😸

If you could make this an occasional thing, I will really appreciate it. Haikyuu was the one anime that motivated me into getting into volley ball and now I play for my college. The lack of new episodes has been annoying and this would be a breath of fresh air. Thank you.

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It wasn't a specific mission to kill the Raikage if I remember correctly. The hidden cloud village was outmaneuvered by the rock and the Raikage and a small contingent of Shinobi were caught lacking and so the Raikage stayed behind so that the rest could escape. I don't think any sane military leader would sacrifice 10,000 Shinobi just to kill one man, wartime or not. That would be the height of strategic stupidity. And I'm sure there were talents in that 10,000 that Onoki wouldn't have wanted dead. It doesn't make sense to me.

Finally someone talks about Pakura. Most fanfics forget the fact that the hidden sand practically served their strongest shinobi at the time on a silver platter to the hidden mist. All the hidden villages got that dirt except probably the hidden rock. They just hate the tree huggers.

It's Cornbringer. Hasn't let me down yet.

So it's dropped huh. Another good one bites the dust and for some reason all those harem and zero plot stories never stop uploading. Ohh well 🚶

This feels like fiendfyre from Harry Potter. Does DC have harry potter?

1000%

I really like the fact that he didn't stop. Raven should be the only one able to bring him back and even then not completely. The dark side never completely goes away.

Nah. She isn't burning anyone and anything that gets in her way and she isn't going for an imaginary thing or person. I'd say she's far better that MOM Scarlet Witch. She seems way more sane and I like it.

If this is actually Lucifer Morningstar of DC, you do know that he can just tell Superman to die and that's it. No epic fight, no struggle. Superman just dies. There is a reason he's joint number 2 in the entire DC multiverse. I personally think Micheal Demiurges can't beat him but what do I know.

Author-san, is this guy actually going to be good at something? Don't get me wrong, the slow burn of this fanfic is a novelty but it'll get old soon. I know the feeling of trying to flesh out the background as I'm an author too but you should start teasing somethings even if you are not giving it to us straight. This chapter was a teaser if I got it right so overall splendid job. I want to read more of this.

Nothing like prep time bruv. That's just the random excuse given for the reason Batman can fight the big bars and not the deranged normies of his city. I mean, there is no member of the Justice league apart from Green arrow that can't beat him. And really, do you see the albeit trained normie called batman fighting Darkseid like some comics portray. And Dragon dwarfs Batsy in combat. I mean, he literally taught Bats some of what he knows. I feel the only martial artist that surpasses Dragon in DC is Karate Kid and that guy CAN go toe to toe with Superman.

Tbh, the reverse flash is better. Far smarter, better in combat, created his own speed force, became unkillable. Like he can't be killed. But plot armor and protagonist vibes just pave the way for Barry.

And please don't tell me she's still a child. I'd like to think that when I was younger, I never did this. Prolly her parents that allowed her get away with anything.

I personally don't like this but the story's been real nice so far so I won't complain. I'm of the opinion that one should at least listen to a party before making assumptions. And he took her in, gave her a huge amount of money, never treated her badly and she goes doing what? Judging. Personally, I'd have left her on the streets, might knock some sense into that "I know it all" brain of her's. And what was he supposed to do when people came to kill him, allow them? Never liked Hermione and this just highlights that fact.

And that is on period. Dragon would school Batsy any day of the week easy.

if this is the young justice universe, then no the flash isn't overpowered. Can barely run at mach 20.