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exactly and failed at that too
Because Author messed up by making MC too op early. Now the story is dead and he can only do forced plot and bs like this.
How does MC have that amount of chakra to use so much shadow clones and the clones doing jutsu??
For someone could do a lot of manipulation politically and in the dark, he was atrociously dumb in fighting
Indeed that's the problem with beginner author that writes op mc, They kill their own novel
there is no concrete explanation on how MC got his power. when in doubt throw everything to template. MC has FTG, purple lightning, noble phantasm out of his ass. MC pretty much can defeat anyone but still find ways to mess up. MC grew from a silent type to arrogant young master specially the snake cave part. MC is way too op therefore the story is lax and boring. If he only focused on Mihawk power it would have been interesting but he had to add a lot of bullshit on top of that, and then act like Mihawk when he is just a pale copy like really? Pretending to be someone you are not. Anyway the novel starts good but gets boring and annoying as it goes.
yup this is what had salvage this novel for me. two gorillas
how when and where did he learn FTG????? Plus how does he have purple lightning????
It's not that they are not affected. It's just that the tailed beast inside of them will disturb the chakra in the brain and broke the jinchuriki out of the genjutsu almost immediately. A mangekyo is enough to manipulate a jinchuriki or put tailed beat inside a genjutsu. E.g Obito, Itachi, Madara. Don't just say not affected, or it will mean they are immune.
Plot armor is as thick as Author fake sense of worth
Poor guy. Thinking he could outsmart Aizen. Believe it
young master
wasn't the point of the cheating exam is test stealth and their ability to collect information without getting caught. That's what a ninja is right? This was unnecessary. The MC is starting to turn like those arrogant young masters in chinese novel american style
but can it counter Magekyo sharingan?
i totally agree with hibaba
let's hope for the sake of our world that the author of this fanfic is not the same as MC