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David_Arenas12hCommentedThis is an incorrect situation, because the canon confirms that he eats alone, and not in the cafeteria.
"Why bother wearing extra gear when it'll get in the way of my dazzle?" Ayoyama added.- David_Arenas12hCommented
"Allmight doesn´t need", not "Allmight needs".
"Like hell, Allmight needs a piece of equipment to help him. It'll just hold him back," Bakugo said. - David_Arenas13hCommented
"Eijiro", not "Eijro".
"Years." She finished. Eijro's smile flattened, and he nodded, leaving the room and coming back with a bucket. - David_Arenas13hCommented
"about her when", not "about her as when".
To her downfall, he wasn't so easily shaken, but the same couldn't be said about her as when he did the same to her. She blushed a new shade of pink. Romantic and loving gestures were her kryptonite. - David_Arenas13hCommented
"I have one", not "I have to have one".
"I have to have one," Eijiro said, "An opportunity with No. 10 Gang Orca, a mix of on- and off-field work experience with training from Gang Orca himself, but this experience isn't in the city." - David_Arenas13hCommented
"She got up", not "I got up".
Mina, who was leaning on Eiji's back, said, "Sure!" I got up excitedly and went to help. - David_Arenas13hCommented
"but why now?" not "why now?
"Wait, what? I mean, yeah, sure, why now?" He also asked if she was sure again while contacting his parents about this. - David_Arenas14hCommented
You have forgotten Mina.
Behind Eijiro, at the gates, stood Midoriya, Ochako, and Todoroki. They stood there silently, waiting for Eijiro's sign. - David_Arenas14hCommented
"`Iida´, Todoroki understood", not "Todoroki, `Iida´, understood".
Todoroki, 'Iida,' understood his rage and hatred, which were blinding. 'This is why you wanted us to wait behind,' he thought, looking at the others who held worried faces. - David_Arenas14hCommented
You should write something else between "doesn´t pay out" and "but if it does", because otherwise the sentence makes no sense.
If what he plans to do doesn't pay out, but if it does, then he could easily change. That's why he hadn't handed his sheet in yet. There were several high-ranking heroes on the list. One that he wanted to learn from. - David_Arenas15hCommented
"he´ll read", not "he reads".
Grinning, he nodded and said, "Yeah, I'm going to send him a fan letter. Hopefully, he reads it and responds. If not, I can see if Mr Aizawa sensei can help," Eiji said with hopeful laughter. - David_Arenas15hCommented
I don´t get this. Is he saying he is stronger now? Because if he was as strong as when he faced Todoroki, he couldn´t defeat him so easily.
'I also realised it now, but I was as strong as I am right now against Todoroki. I'm pretty sure I could wipe the floor with him. I might be the strongest in the class right now,' the thought bubbled to the surface as he clenched his fists. - David_Arenas15hCommented
"Hey Mina!" Eijiro smiled.
Eijiro, "Hey Mina!" smiled. - David_Arenas1dCommentedCh 36 Mock and times*
- David_Arenas3dCommented
", instead training", not "instead of training"
Eijiro wasn't using his quirk instead of training his physical strength. She joked about sitting on his back while he did push-ups. - David_Arenas3dCommented
What color is the crop top?
Today was the last day off, and Kirishima and Mina were in the backyard training themselves. Eiji put on nothing but black shorts, and Mina also put on black shorts with a crop top. - David_Arenas3dCommented
"The dog boy", not "The god boy"
The god boy nodded and said, "Yep, another couple must've had sex again, bastards." - David_Arenas3dCommented
"marks on his neck", not "marks on her neck"
She also returned the favour by leaving marks on her neck. With her hand, she grabbed and pulled on his hair, lightly hissing at the constant pleasure.