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JustReaddd

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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Posted

    Writing Quality is good, just add more monologues then it would be perfect. Update Stability has improved, compared to your last novel :). Story development until chapter 10 could be a little slower. Example write more about the trial, personally I think it was a bit fast but that’s just me. Character design is good. World background so far so good. The depth realm is well explained. He also has some unique powers which I have never seen before. But don’t make them too Op, because then it will get boring. I see you put some restrictions on his abilities which is good. I’m looking forward for future chapters:)

    Mystic Fisher of the Lost Waters
    Fantasy · ExpiredRice
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Commented

    Nice chapter

    Ch 2 Ocean
    Mystic Fisher of the Lost Waters
    Fantasy · ExpiredRice
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Commented

    Sad that you stopped writing the other novel. Though this one looks promising. Keep up :)

    Ch 1 The Depths
    Mystic Fisher of the Lost Waters
    Fantasy · ExpiredRice
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Replied to austin_kutz

    Wait fr?

    "I want too much, so I'm even crazier. Junior Brother, let's travel together in this life!"
    Outside Of Time
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Commented

    They will probably get exposed in the test for the sword sect thingy

    The evil ghost immediately nodded and memorized these two names. As long as the other party appeared in the range of its perception in the future, it would be able to sense them immediately.
    Outside Of Time
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Replied to magicpootang

    Not the captain. Anyone else is completely fine but not the captain

    "I want too much, so I'm even crazier. Junior Brother, let's travel together in this life!"
    Outside Of Time
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Replied to TheFallofAllThings

    It has been like this since chapter 1

    She is going to be here for the next eight months and will try her hardest to achieve the breakthrough into the Grandmaster Class. 
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Commented

    So slow upload time

    Ch 3027 Fighting on the Edge II
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Replied to Neferien

    Author is writing for his father surgery or something like that, I’ve read it Bedford somewhere. So I don’t think it’s gonna end soon. Things that we miss: -Who Ashlyn really is. -Backstory of Ashlyn. -The higher worlds -Titans -Somewhere in the novel it said that tyrants is just mid level strength in the higher worlds, so it’s a lot of ranks left. - Even those top from higher worlds is just a weakling to titans.

    Ch 3010 The Method
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Replied to Neferien

    I think it’s a lot left. Even the higher worlds are just small things for titans

    Ch 3010 The Method
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Replied to Neferien

    Very very soon. It’s just one final boss fight left

    Ch 3010 The Method
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Replied to LeoStriker23

    But we both know he won’t get anything. Author want the mc to be as self sustainable as possible, not taking help from outsiders. Thought is irritating we can’t do anything about it.

    My clone had found a better way to merge with mutation while reducing the side effects, but it made the process very slow, but we have time for that.
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Commented

    :(, they should have given michal stuff back.

    Ch 3010 The Method
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Replied to 1Fan_aticReader

    Nope, it’s given a lot of hints. Upper worlds, there was a time he met a clone of a girl, and there she said to herself “I need to contact my original self in the upper world, so when he ascends we will be the first to recruit him.” Something like that

    Ch 3010 The Method
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Commented

    Hope they give Michael something back which will help them. I mean he gave a lot of stuff to them and even emptied 80% of resources which he planted which was enough for people to level up for centuries

    My clone had found a better way to merge with mutation while reducing the side effects, but it made the process very slow, but we have time for that.
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Replied to VividlyLucid29

    😭

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    Ascension of the Immortal Asura
    Fantasy · rRandom
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Replied to Vivianne_Ormazabal

    Si

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    Ascension of the Immortal Asura
    Fantasy · rRandom
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Commented

    Here comes the power

    Boss Battle! Against The Mold Legion! And... An Ice Giant Girl?
    Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Commented

    I’m sad for her

    Ch 41 Origins
    Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • JustReaddd
    JustReaddd1yr
    Posted

    I’ve read until chapter the recen chapter which is chapter 8. The writing quality is very good, almost no writing mistakes. Although a slow story development as I can see it’s good. Updating stability is decent, 2-3 chapters daily Story development is also good. I’m not good at writing review so Im just writing what I think. I think it’s unique, ehh the start I mean. Also for the future the world background would be be eh big considering what would happend. Character design is good: his character is till in development, still young but yeah it’s ok.

    Apocalyptic Wonderland
    Action · ExpiredRice
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