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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
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    the "adult" scenes are very evident! I like the idea of the missions that the female lead takes to earn a living. she kindly lets the ML stay at hers but he goes off soliciting immediately, the next day! There are too many dubious and unethical situations in the chapter episodes list. Maybe a one off detail in one chapter would have sufficed without the need to explain the KS and techniques in detail. Photos of drawings of manga type cartoon characters, is what I am hoping most people are requesting. I have seen amateurish drawings that look nothing like real people (alive or dead), that could serve as illustrations and are not manga cartoon style, if that would breach "copyright"! Although grammar and writing style seems okay and easy to follow, I agree that the names and mission scenarios are implausible. I was hoping for martial art's/combat style technical lists, instead of innuendo or euphemism!

    Ch -2 Character List
    Naked Sword Art
    Eastern · RaLegacy
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
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    (got a?) or (received a?) or (had a) present/gift. I don't understand the grammar. Even if she seems to "speak" fast, is this a "voice recognition to autotype" error? Some people do speak in "clipped" sentences or use abbreviations when speaking, so those with hearing difficulties or some that don't understand accents and slang will have a problem with the dialogue. I still like the storyline, but wonder if her initial idea to get him to confess, using clandestine methods may have been approached differently. If the evidence had gone to court or to his fiancée then it could have been seen as entrapment by both recipients. I like the female lead, as it is usually men that stray and will use any excuse to protest innocence. If a woman can be faithful during a "relationship" or engagement, then why can't men? He is still chasing her relentlessly and wanted to ruin her family career to avenge his bruised ego and pride! It still seems he is using others to investigate each other as potential accomplices in his mother's imprisonment, but doesn't understand that she may have confessed after being presented with irrefutable evidence. He doesn't like the fact that she had some sort of camaraderie with his business associate and made them both investigate each other. He is displaying narcissistic and unethical business practice. I like the idea that she eventually bought him a coffee machine for his office, so that he would stop demanding her to make his coffee/retype documents and then work late to finish her work for the day.

    Ch 53 Did he knock his head and lose his brain
    The Tyrant's Wife
    Urban · Avalorian_
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Replied to Ortiz37

    so true. what rich boss wants to drag his PA out to shop, when she has other plans. not shopping at designer stores means she can afford unique items and have them delivered. some designer labels especially those endorsed by celebrities with over marketing/advertising are so garish, overpriced and usually lack distinguishing features apart from the label!

    Ch 53 Did he knock his head and lose his brain
    The Tyrant's Wife
    Urban · Avalorian_
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Replied to Deni_Chance

    but how does he sense what she is sensing (excluding physical harm/pain). empathy is feeling sympathy for others without having been through the ordeal themselves. Reece seems to be displaying narcissistic tendencies, by not being tactful towards Trin and her closest family, about his decisions to accept Trin as his mate, publicly and then privately; but then not telling her that they can take things slowly. Being with him was safest and what was expected to happen. he could at least have made a ruse to make it seem as if she too would be accompanying him, so that the enemy did see the opportunity to attack.

    Ch 101 Reece-A Talk With Riley And Noah
    Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Replied to BabyAdore

    I would not mind being gifted the book

    Ch 39 Safest place
    SPELLBOUND
    Fantasy · KazzenlX
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
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    Ch 38 Reading or kissing
    SPELLBOUND
    Fantasy · KazzenlX
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    aw so they do have feelings for each other

    Ch 38 Reading or kissing
    SPELLBOUND
    Fantasy · KazzenlX
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    love the build up so far. sassy, smart do gooder takes a narcissist down from his pedestal!

    Ch 56 What dream are you stuck in?
    The Tyrant's Wife
    Urban · Avalorian_
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    an unusual place where vampires don't bite humans! intriguing

    Ch 36 Hidden
    SPELLBOUND
    Fantasy · KazzenlX
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    oh no! poor Trin. bit disappointed that Reece hasn't tried to get there on his on and mindlinked the pack of his intentions en route; getting Noah to set up the teams required. time is of the essence and these warlocks are intent on doing considerable damage to Trin both emotionally and physically

    Ch 101 Reece-A Talk With Riley And Noah
    Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    so Reece's pieces are bigger than the proverbial sweet! the dirty dawg!

    Ch 88 Trinity-Take Charge (Mature Rating)
    Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    such a good mum in law🐰

    Ch 81 Reece-Another Lecture From Mom
    Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    ooh how good to get a real vampire love story. so much better than twilight and Bram's Dracula

    Ch 30 Greatest temptation
    SPELLBOUND
    Fantasy · KazzenlX
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    haha - I was only joking about the dog collar

    Ch 71 Trinity-Christmas Part 2
    Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    aww - such a sweet and perfect first Christmas

    Ch 70 Trinity-Christmas Part 1
    Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Replied to Deni_Chance

    so is she half far?

    Ch 67 Reece-An Injured Wolf Means Lockdown For The Luna
    Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    loving this book. I started reading over a month ago, then lost it and am glad to say I refound it again!

    Ch 27 Dacria
    SPELLBOUND
    Fantasy · KazzenlX
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    poor Carter and Trinny. at least he can sympathize with her predicament

    Ch 64 Trinity-A Visit From Carter
    Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    a muzzle with a lead on a harness?

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    Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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  • Ajmal_Khan_8856
    Ajmal_Khan_88562yr
    Commented

    intense story. the torture was brutal

    Ch 28 Chapter 28
    The Alpha King
    Fantasy · chillnutella
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